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Thanks Kristen! It probably wasn't appropriate for Kat to talk to Kyle at work but I think she might have wanted to spare him a trip to the police station. Glad you liked the twist at the end

Thanks KittCatt Thought I needed to give Kyle a little bit of comfort. Life is so hard for him right now. I feel like I'm being terribly cruel. I want him to still have a good relationship with Tamara despite everything that's going on, so I'm glad you liked that scene. x

Just caught up on this! Glad Kyle is okay and that Alex got arrested in the end. I think she clearly is crazy and probably needs help more than anything. Glad Claire is safe too.

Thanks KittCatt! I feel the same about Ash. I think he does stupid things because he thinks they're the right thing. They're usually the worst possible thing anyone could do in whatever the situation happens to be, and you end up sitting there going "Why, Ash? Why?" I do like him in his scenes with Billie though. I think the two actors have great chemistry and work incredibly well as believable siblings. I enjoy seeing them together. Anyway, glad you're enjoying it.

Thanks both of you for taking the time to comment. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I'm really enjoying writing it! I don't think that Ash should have told anyone either but I think that's exactly what his character would do. He's not the sharpest tool sometimes, and he's not great at keeping secrets either! lol!

Thanks both of you for the feedback. Looks like I've exceeded my 'like's again... oh well! Glad you're enjoying it so far.

If the characters were in that way inclined I could definitely see them as a couple. They'd actually be pretty cute together lol!

Love it! I really liked the bit where Oscar called them 'dads', that was cute... and it's pretty in character that Oscar would just blurt it out like that.

Lovely chapter. So glad that things are getting sorted out and that Leah and Zac are going to get a romantic trip away somewhere. I feel sorry for Amanda.

Thanks! Much appreciated as always! You've just got in before the new chapter goes up, lol!

Great chapter! Glad that Zac did the sensible thing and reported Peter to his superiors. Like he said though, he still has his contacts so i wonder if he'll be able to hurt them from a distance. Feel sorry for Amanda. She's been dragged the whole way back here for Peter's job and now she'll find out that he's still obsessed with Leah and that he'll be going to prison. Just as well for her to be rid of him, but still not easy to deal with if she's actually in love with him (However misguided that might be). Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks RR1 I don't think he did know it was still going on, not for sure anyway, or he hadn't allowed himself to think about it. He was just too traumatised. It's the discovery of the bodies that has made him question himself. Poor Kyle

Ooh, I'm glad they know who's behind it now but I wonder what they can do about it. Maybe tell Kat? They only have Tank's word for it though, and no other proof, so it might be difficult for her to help. It might help Zac move on too. Now that he knows who his kidnapper was, he should feel like he has a little more control in a way. Looking forward to the next update

Thanks JarlieFanEver! Appreciate the feedback. x

Thanks Kristen, I've exceeded my 'likes' for today apparently. I didnt know there was a limit! Lol! Appreciate the feedback

Thanks KittCatt! Much appreciated. I thought it would be hard for Phoebe to keep it to herself, especially with Ash getting the wrong end of the stick and badgering her about what happened the other night. She'd have to give him some explanation, and like you said, people often need support themselves. Glad you're enjoying it! xxx

Thanks KittCatt! I really appreciate the feedback! It's really kind of you to say that. I do think that Phoebe would be really upset to think that something bad had happened to Kyle, even if they aren't together anymore. And it kind of makes sense that he would tell her, given that she's the person he's known the longest, and he doesn't have any brothers to look out for him anymore. Glad you're enjoying the story x

This is all a bit of a mess really isn't it?! Holly being forced to come on to Zac, and poor Zac having to fend her off when he's still a bit shaky. Not fun. I wonder what evil Peter knows about Holly's mum? Hmmm, interesting ;-) Again, love how affectionate they are with each other. And I absolutely loved the bit with Oscar in the previous chapter. He's a little too interested in what goes on behind Leah and Zac's closed door! Think he needs to get some action of his own. Still... pretty funny!

Great chapter!!! I love love love Zac and Leah in this. They're so lovely together. I'm glad Zac was able to walk the path with Leah's support Nice that the kids are happy for them. Is it weird that I don't really want Wayne to be found out? I kinda just think he's been used by Peter and seems a little lost and confused. Ooh, evil Peter! Can't help feeling sorry for Holly. She's really mixed up and she's being sent in like a lamb to the slaughter. What does Peter have over her mother I wonder?! Looking forward to the next chapter! xxx

Well done to Matt and Oscar for being grown up enough (now that they've calmed down) to talk rationally about the situation they're in. Was a nice chat between them. Loved Matt's 'crazy kids' dialogue ;-) very funny! As I've said before, I think you write dialogue exceptionally well. You have a great ear for each character's particular way of speaking. I can hear their voices in my head when I read your stories. Well done :-)

Poor Zac. That had to be so difficult for him! The crowds in the school must have made him so anxious. Good he went back though. Tank did well with his lies. Wonder if there'll be any evidence to prove it was him. Looking forward to the next chapter! x

Thanks to both of you for the continued support. It's so lovely to see those little notifications pop up I do really appreciate it. Glad you're enjoying the story so far... Poor Kyle! I don't know why I'm so cruel to him. Especially since he's always been my favourite character on the show. I wonder if any of the cast ever read any of these stories. I kinda hope they don't! Nic Westaway might be wondering what he ever did to get on my wrong side, lol!

Fab chapter! Really well written :-) Poor Zac, he must be so scared. It was very brave of him to finally leave the house and come to school. I'm glad Nate got through to him. Holly coming back cannot be good news for Zac and Leah. I'll be interested to see what happens when she's back. Looking forward to the next update.

Thank you! That's very kind of you. Glad you liked the Zac and Leah bits. Thought you might! haha.

Thanks KittCatt! I did think it would be nice to have a few more characters in the story. It's been extremely Kyle and Tamara focused the last few chapters. Really appreciate your feedback as always!