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Thanks KittCatt! once again, the feedback is much appreciated! I don't think Kyle would ever really get over this. Like you say, Phoebe was everything to him at one time. For her to betray him like this would hurt him so much more. I agree with you about Kat. I though I'd explore her use of alcohol as a crutch in this story. She's done that plenty of times in the show so I thought it would be interesting for there to be some real repercussions this time. A cop really shouldn't be behaving this way. As always, thanks for reading and for taking the time to comment!

Such a good chapter. Loved it! Oh wow! So pleased that Spencer is back, and just in time for the baby arriving! I'm really glad that she has a little bit of extra support now, just when she really needs it! Liked the jibe about the fact that he has a brother living there and that it would seem reasonable that he visits every now and then. Made me smile. Hope he'll stick around for a little while! Loved the line "No, I never dated Matt, that was just a rumour." That made me laugh. Glad Oscar and Skye's relationship is so strong. Hope they can hold it together when the baby comes. That'll be tough for both of them. Looking forward to the next chapter! x

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I thought it'd be fun to have Phoebe land herself in it completely It would be very hard for Kyle to forgive her for this!

I think Ash did the only sensible thing, which is exactly what he wouldn't have done in the show! lol! I'd be sitting shouting at the screen, going 'Ash, what are you doing?! Why?!' Thanks for the feedback as always, really appreciate it!

Loved this chapter What Matt did wasn't very nice but it probably was easier than telling her, and he's obviously not great at communicating his feelings. I think Casey was in a difficult position and he couldn't really have told her himself. She wouldn't have believed him. As it is, it's nice that she was able to see that. The thing with Brooklyn Nine-Nine was funny. Liked the way they were just able to sit there together. Looking forward to the next chapter! x

No, you're not really meant to. I'm writing Phoebe as a bit of a tragic character. She's awful on so many levels but at the same time you can see that it's mainly because she's unhappy. Glad you enjoyed the Kyle and Tamara scene! You've just snuck in, moments before I load the new chapter! lol! Hope you like it! x

Really liked this chapter even if you did just get rid of one of my favourites! Lol! I like to think that Matt might actually make something of his life and not just spend the rest of his life in dead end jobs with no clear direction. Going on tour sounds like a good move for him, although I don't envy him having to spend hours on end in a car with Phoebe! Feel a bit sorry for Maddy, now she's lost him completely. Skye's chat with Irene was funny. Loved it! Really looking forward to the next chapter! x

Thanks so much for the feedback! Wondered if you'd notice Leah being pregnant. I thought you'd like that! Lol! It's irrelevant to the story, just thought it would be nice! Glad you're enjoying it! x

Such a great chapter! Love love love it! A really good start. Love how all the teenagers are off doing such cool things. Especially Oscar! I'd love it if he was actually interning at NASA! That would be great! Love little Charlie with VJ and that she's missing Hunter. That was an interesting twist, Hunter becoming a cop! Haha! As always, I love Zac and Leah together, just so cute Great opening to the story. I wonder what Peter has planned? He's proper psycho isn't he?! Lol! Looking forward to the next chapter and hope you manage to sort out the laptop issues! x

Thanks RR1! Again, thank you so so much for the continued support. I think Phoebe can be a bit vindictive when she wants to be. Knowing about Brax would be the ultimate leverage if she wanted to hurt Ash. In any case, I'm enjoying writing her as the worst person possible, lol! Thanks for reading! x Thanks Kristen! Like a lot of people, I really don't like Phoebe in the show. She never fails to annoy me with her complete inability to see things from other people's perspectives. She's always unbelievably selfish. I wanted to write her this way in the story. Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks so much for all the encouragement! x

Thank you KittCatt! I'm so glad that you're enjoying it! I'm enjoying writing it so so much. I can't stop thinking about it, and thinking about poor Kyle! Lol! Really glad you liked Kyle and Tamara's scene at the start. I wanted them to have some nice time together even if it is a little tainted by what's going on. Life is rough for them, but they still have a good relationship. Phoebe has really made a big mess of things hasn't she!? Lol! Thanks for reading and for always taking the time to comment. You're a little star! x

Great chapter! I actually really like Matt and Evie together (despite my allegiance to Josh lol!) and think they make an interesting couple. Liked the chat between Maddy and Roo. Looking forward to more x

Thanks Suzza! that's so nice of you to say! I really do appreciate the continued support! It's so nice to see the little notification pop up and know that someone is reading. Really glad you're enjoying it! x

Thanks to both of you for the feedback. I really appreciate it. Phoebe is pretty darn awful in this story but I don't think that's too much of a stretch for her character! Lol! Prob won't get a chance to update again till Thursday or Friday Sorry for the long wait, just a bit busy this week! Thanks for reading! xxx

Thanks JarlieFanEver! Really glad you liked it. It is pretty nasty of Phoebe to make Ash take the blame for her, but in her mind both of them need to pay for what they did. Kyle should be angry with Kat. She did go sticking her nose in where it wasn't wanted, and now everyone knows absolutely everything about him. She's taken every tiny bit of privacy he had away from him! Glad you liked the Noah scene too

Thanks KittCatt! Glad you liked it. I really don't like Phoebe, Ash, or Kat as characters in the show so it's kind of fun to write them as awful people in my story. I agree with you completely that Kat tends to act in a way that is thoroughly inappropriate for a cop, so it would be nice to see there actually be some repercussions for her. She did just leave her laptop lying around! Phoebe is also awful, and she did do a truly terrible thing, but I can see why you wouldn't feel sorry for Kat or Ash either. Glad you liked the scene with Noah I was a little bit nervous writing Irene and Alf because their way of speaking is so distinctive, and they're both such iconic characters, so I tend to steer away from them. Hope it was okay

Thanks KittCatt! Really appreciate the feedback! Glad you liked the letter I think David and Jenny are definitely what he needs right now and it would be a good idea for them to come visit.

Thanks KittCatt! Kat does have a bit of a history of drinking and I think Emerson wouldn't be that impressed with her. (It was nice of him not to bring up the lost gun and handcuffs! lol!) Sleeping with Ash hasn't exactly been her finest moment (or Ash's for that matter! ) lol! Thanks Jarlie! I'm enjoying writing Heath as a good big brother. He never really got be that kind of brother on the show but I think he could be quite kind and sensitive in the right conditions. He was always very protective of his kids and very soft and gentle with Bianca. Kyle being so hurt and vulnerable would bring out his softer, more 'dad-like' personality. Glad you're enjoying it x Thanks RR1! I know, poor Kyle He's really grasping at straws. I think it would be hard for him not to. Thanks Kristen! You'll just have to wait and see! lol! I really appreciate you all taking the time to comment. It really means a lot! Hope to have a new chapter up this evening! (Tomorrow morning for those of you in Australia /NZ)

Thanks Suzza101! Really appreciate the feedback I think Heath would be trying really hard to take Brax's place and be the big brother that he never had to be before. I think he'd have grown up a bit too. Glad you're enjoying the story so far.

Fabulous chapter So well written Lots of angst in this one! I can understand Matt completely. It's a really difficult situation for him and I can't really blame him for feeling that way. It was a pretty mature decision to move out. They can't just keep living together with that atmosphere and the longer he strings it out the harder it will be. Feel sorry for Maddy though. Skye and Oscar was pretty sweet. Glad she was willing to give him a chance and accept the situation with Maddy, although I imagine it might be more difficult to cope with than she thinks. When the baby arrives he'll be a lot less focused on her and she might not be too happy about that. Sad about Evie and Josh but I can understand where Josh is coming from on this. A bit inconsiderate of Evie really. Looking forward to the next chapter. Have a good weekend! x

Thanks KittCatt! Really appreciate the feedback as always. Glad you liked that scene. I hope that Heath was believable enough and not too sappy. I think he'd be there for Kyle when he really had to. I wanted Heath to be there as support for Tamara too.

Thank you all so much for the kind comments. Glad you liked the Heath scenes. I think Heath would 'step up' for Kyle when it really mattered. Seeing his foster parents is probably a good idea. They were the first real source of comfort and kindness that he ever had in his life. Should hopefully have the next chapter in a couple of days . Thank you all so much for reading x

Awwwwwwwwww!!!! This was such a gorgeous ending to such a great story. I'm so happy for Zac and Leah! It was a lovely idea to call her Charlie Denise, a great way to honour the people they've lost. Great to see VJ and Hunter so in love with their baby sister! And it was nice that Ruby could come and meet the baby. Loved the bit where he showed the class the photo with no shirt. His joke sounded very Zac. Really well written story throughout. I'll miss reading it but really hope that you write more in the future xxx

Thanks ZacxLeah! Glad you enjoyed it Poor Kyle is right!... I feel really bad for the poor guy I'll hopefully have the next chapter up soon

Awww, I think it's a lovely chapter! There was a real family feel to it. Really liked that everyone seemed to get on so well and that they all got to see how in love Zac and Leah are Really looking forward to the final chapter x