Ludub Posted February 7, 2017 Report Share Posted February 7, 2017 Ooh very funny chapter Have to say, I really like Ray! He's not the brightest spark though, is he? Mind you, Derek doesn't sound like the most put together guy either. Maybe Ray getting roped into this plan of Derek's could turn out well for Kyle since he doesn't sound too invested in any of this? Hopefully his conscience will win out. I wonder why Derek is so intent on killing Kyle in the first place? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AtlantaG1912 Posted February 7, 2017 Report Share Posted February 7, 2017 2 minutes ago, Ludub said: Ooh very funny chapter Have to say, I really like Ray! He's not the brightest spark though, is he? Mind you, Derek doesn't sound like the most put together guy either. Maybe Ray getting roped into this plan of Derek's could turn out well for Kyle since he doesn't sound too invested in any of this? Hopefully his conscience will win out. I wonder why Derek is so intent on killing Kyle in the first place? thank god someone has found it funny as i was worried no one would when they read it. You will find out more about derek in three chapters, which i'm planning on writing and uploading today. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted February 7, 2017 Report Share Posted February 7, 2017 5 minutes ago, AtlantaG1912 said: thank god someone has found it funny as i was worried no one would when they read it. I always find Ray very funny! He and Derek make a great comedy duo though! absolute gold! 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted February 7, 2017 Report Share Posted February 7, 2017 Great chapter, I also find Ray funny in this and I'm loving his involvement in the fanfic, I'm extremely curious as well to see what Derek wants with Kyle and I can't wait to read more please update soon. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted February 7, 2017 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2017 Great update Haha Ray is so funny in this, lol. Wondering whar Derek does want with Ray Update soon please Xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted February 7, 2017 Report Share Posted February 7, 2017 Aw, it's quite sweet that Kyle opened up like that to Aden. He must trust him What a horrible thing to happen to poor little Kyle when he was small though. He really hasn't had an easy life. Looking forward to the next chapter x 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AtlantaG1912 Posted February 7, 2017 Report Share Posted February 7, 2017 (edited) 2 minutes ago, Ludub said: Aw, it's quite sweet that Kyle opened up like that to Aden. He must trust him What a horrible thing to happen to poor little Kyle when he was small though. He really hasn't had an easy life. Looking forward to the next chapter x i know i felt like kyle needed to open about this to someone other than his girlfriend and his brother so i thought why not his best friend and then he can tell everyone else. And you won't have to wait long as i'm writing it now. x Edited February 7, 2017 by AtlantaG1912 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted February 7, 2017 Report Share Posted February 7, 2017 Great chapters Ray is funny. Liked Kyle telling Aden about his mum. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted February 7, 2017 Report Share Posted February 7, 2017 Great chapter Liked all the teens playing twister. Truth or Dare doesn't sound like a good idea. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AtlantaG1912 Posted February 7, 2017 Report Share Posted February 7, 2017 1 minute ago, Kristen said: Great chapter Liked all the teens playing twister. Truth or Dare doesn't sound like a good idea. Update again soon thanks for reading and i planned for the game of truths to be funny. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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