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Really enjoyed that chapter. Loved the chat between Casey and Phoebe. I can completely understand how they feel about this. It would be surprising and a little hurtful to realise that Kyle is still so guarded and that there's so much they don't know. At the same time though, it's understandable that he keeps stuff to himself. Foster care can't have been easy and he's had to put up walls to protect himself. Glad they both realise he isn't doing it to hurt them and that it'll take time to earn his trust. Very nicely written conversation.

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2 minutes ago, Ludub said:

Maybe not a bad idea to warn people about Kyle being allergic in case they run into a real snake. I'm glad the girls agreed to stop playing pranks too. Looking forward to the next chapter x

thats what i thought when i wrote. You won't have to wait long as i'm currently writing that chapter now and going to upload once it's done. x

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