Inactive User Posted December 25, 2016 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2016 Great chapters Liked how Belle scared the girls Looking forwards to the next chapter Xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted December 27, 2016 Report Share Posted December 27, 2016 Haha! The boys are doing a good job of pretending they don't know. Looking forward to finding out what happens next. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 28, 2016 Report Share Posted December 28, 2016 Great chapter the boys are doing a great job pretending not to know it was the girls that stole their stuff. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted December 28, 2016 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2016 Great chapter Liked how the boys are doing a good job-pretending that they didn't know that the girls stole their stuff, lol! Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted January 9, 2017 Report Share Posted January 9, 2017 , I loved how the boys are pretendinging that they had no clue that the girls stole their stuff, priceless i can't wait to read more please update soon 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted January 20, 2017 Report Share Posted January 20, 2017 Ray doesn't seem to be enjoying his work too much at all. Feel kind of sorry for him missing all this time with his family but I guess I probably shouldn't if he's going to follow through with his boss' orders to kill Kyle. I shouldn't really have any sympathy for the bad guy, should I?! I think Tamara was very very wrong to tell everyone about Kyle running away as a child. He told her that in confidence, and gathering everyone round to talk about him behind his back like that was extremely disrespectful. I think he'd be pretty upset I guess Kyle found the snake? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted January 20, 2017 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2017 Great chapter Tamara has no right to betray Kyle's confidence by telling the others about his past. He is going to be hurt and betrayed when he finds out somehow. That's why I found it hard to trust anyone after telling the wrong people my problems and whatever in the past, you know. Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 20, 2017 Report Share Posted January 20, 2017 (edited) Great chapters I agree with the comments above ^ Tamara had no right to tell the others what Kyle told her in confidence, Poor Kyle finding the snake glad Phoebe was there to comfort him. Update again soon Edited January 20, 2017 by Kristen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted January 24, 2017 Report Share Posted January 24, 2017 Great chapters. Im loving it, I don't think that it was a good idea for Tamara to tell everyone what Kyle told her. And it seems that Ray really wants to get home which will mean that they probably go for Kyle soon. Poor Kyle finding the snake and having a panic attack. Glad Phoebe is helping him and I hope that he will be okay. I can't wait to read more, please update soon. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 25, 2017 Report Share Posted January 25, 2017 Great chapter poor Kyle! Young Kyle getting bitten by a snake that would scare anyone as a grown. lucky it's just a rubber one in the tent. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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