Red Ranger 1 Posted April 11, 2017 Report Share Posted April 11, 2017 Ohh boy. Scarily in character frankly, with VJ and Billie trying their best to go along with the stepford couple. Looking forward to more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 12, 2017 Report Share Posted April 12, 2017 Great chapter Hunter and Olivia's place seems scary John as a butler well I didn't see that coming. King of the castle had me giggling Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted April 13, 2017 Report Share Posted April 13, 2017 Great chapter Cracked up at the King Of The Castle part Loved John as a butler, lol. Update soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted April 13, 2017 Report Share Posted April 13, 2017 Still loving your take in Olivia and Hunter's place. the whole John sin's thing was a nice touch ,..... and iyts almost like VJ is magnetic attracted to Billie's ...chest !!! Mat, Evie and the Justin satnav is just soooooo whacky and fun !!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 14, 2017 Report Share Posted April 14, 2017 Loved Hunter and Billie desperately trying to pretend that everything's fiiiine. Nice update. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted April 14, 2017 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2017 Haha! Love it! This just keeps getting weirder and weirder! Phoebe's siren-like warbling convincing John to run around naked?!! Liv and Hunter still desperately trying to ignore how disgusting their house is, Tony the frog?! And now there's a kangaroo in hot pursuit of Evie and Matt in a high rise car park (not what I was expecting!) ...and Matt finding Evie's munching of chicken wings sexy? it takes all sorts, doesn't it?! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 14, 2017 Report Share Posted April 14, 2017 Great chapter Billie and VJ pretending everything is fine Phoebe as a siren swap monster you do know how to write wacky stories. Whoa at Evie and Matt being attacked by a giant kangaroo. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted April 15, 2017 Author Report Share Posted April 15, 2017 Hahaha! Evie and Matt wheelchair jousting! That's some pretty funny imagery right there! Mason showing up in dog form was pretty random but he's really not willing to take no for an answer is he? Hunter giving the step that he tripped on his best death stare really made me giggle! I kinda miss his 'psycho Hunter' days. Nice to see it shine through in this story. Really liking your take on the custody battle, with Renie as an old hag trying to lure Luc into her shack, Ash (the apeman) trying to kidnap her, and VJ insisting that he's not going to let people fight over her... Ash getting distracted by bananas was pretty amusing too! Really looking forward to the next chapter x 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 15, 2017 Report Share Posted April 15, 2017 Great chapter Matt and Evie wheelchair jousting was quite funny to read Hunter tripping and giving the stairs a death glare classy. Reenie as a scary old woman wasn't excepting that. Mason in dog form love it. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 15, 2017 Report Share Posted April 15, 2017 It's like it's a kind of bizarro world version of the show. With a boxing kangaroo. That's satire, man. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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