Ludub Posted April 8, 2017 Report Share Posted April 8, 2017 Oh my god! I love this! sounds like Justin's garage really does have a lot to answer for! I dont envy Matt his time in hospital having to eat revolting rice pudding (made by Leah? ) At least it wasnt crumble! ...and getting bed baths from unappealing nurses. At least Evie has shown up to save the day! Tori and Nate fighting over who gets to give Matt the news was hilarious, and what a way for VJ to run into Billie! Brilliant! Looking forward to the next one! x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 8, 2017 Report Share Posted April 8, 2017 Wow loved that that was very amusing Justin's garage is in serious trouble VJ going blind and feeling up Billie. Nate and Tori fighting in front of Matt and VJ. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted April 8, 2017 Report Share Posted April 8, 2017 Great start to this fanfiction Love this! Looking forwards to the next chapter Xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 8, 2017 Report Share Posted April 8, 2017 Great start, like the idea of Matt and VJ meeting Evie and Billie this way. Looking forward to more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted April 9, 2017 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2017 Well, you did say it was going to be wacky! And you certainly delivered! So funny! Love VJ and Billie finding time to throw innuendo at each other, flirt, and for Billie to get annoyed at VJ for theoretically 'bird watching', all while being under attack from some killer big bird! Ash the apeman arrived just in time, didn't he? And pretty in character too! haha! Can't wait to see what happens next! Hunter and Olivia's new place sounds lovely! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted April 9, 2017 Report Share Posted April 9, 2017 (edited) Great chapter You do know how to write wacky stories. VJ bird watching had me laughing. Hunter and Olivia's place new place seems rather err dreamy Update again soon Edited April 9, 2017 by Kristen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted April 9, 2017 Report Share Posted April 9, 2017 Okaaaay... Hunter and Olivia's new home seems a bit...dangerous. Looking forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted April 10, 2017 Report Share Posted April 10, 2017 Great chapter Cracked up at VJ's bird watching I have to admit I love reading this because I am impressed that you know how to write wacky stories. Update soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted April 10, 2017 Report Share Posted April 10, 2017 (edited) AWESOME first 2 chapters !!! LOVED VJ's very hands on way to meet Billie !!!! Also, really like your take on Ash [it's like, calling him a Neanderthal is an affront to Neanderthals] .....and I REALLY really liked your WAAAY over the top [in a good way] take on Hunter and Olivia's Spoiler Mangrove River "dump" [in the Oz pace show] Particularly liked how Hunter & Liv's behaviour - everything's totally fine [with painted on smiles] - Spoiler matched their behaviour in Oz pace real H&A !!!!! Edited April 10, 2017 by JosieTash 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted April 11, 2017 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2017 Hunter and Olivia's house sounds delightful! It was quite the surprise to find that John Palmer has ended up as their butler 'for his sins'! lol! And I liked the King of the Castle trying his damnedest to pretend that the place is great, while Liv plasters on the fakest smile ever! Very funny! A chinese buffet and a high rise car park now? Oh where, oh where do you get your ideas from?! hahaha! Wonder what the beady eyed monster is (I have an inkling?) and what it wants with poor Matt and Evie?! Oh yeah, and breathy shouty Justin as a sat nav! lol! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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