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Yay you posted :D It's good! Looking forward to reading more! And yes you are slightly addicted to writing fics :P

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Great start Danni and this time I'll try to keep up with your updates :):rolleyes:

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In the start were Romeo & Ruby were sitting over the water I could actually see the scene in my head as I was reading. The way you write and describe everything is amazing. You have a serious gift for writting!

Haha the bit where Ruby said to Romeo about the proposal bit made me laugh! :lol: I wonder for the future hey if he will ever pop the question? :unsure: I thought he was going to then and there, haha. They are so adorable together♥

Aw poor Charlie having problems making Ruby's cake! :(

I absolutely LOVED this first chapter. I cannot wait for more. Fabulous writting as always Danni, so glad you've got another story going and by the sounds of this already it is going to be a REALLY REALLY good one♥

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Great chapter!

I'm with everyone, love how they were all paying Charlie out about her cooking lol

I really wish that Charlie felt she could confide in Brax more :(

Was shocked about Heath & Bianca :o ... Looking forward to more x

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