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Oh my god.I was killing myself with laughter at Jake getting Charlie to re-run him shooting her.Everyone forgot about VJ.Brax did himself in trying out Elijah's moves and is going to become a monk.Xavier gets picked at random to be a police officer.Excellent ending!

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I'm gonna miss reading this fic as it's been nice to come to.

Liked the Charlie and Jake parts of him trying to shoot her all over again and her not letting him. Leah and VJ scene in the car was funny, and how she was surprised to see him there when he'd been there the whole time...Leah must be getting tired looking after Bam Bam.

Look forward to whatever you write next. :)

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