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Oh man.I don't know why you were worrying, that was laugh out loud funny.Spanner, Wrench, Chainsaw and Power Drill!The Braxtons laying landmines at the farm!Heath causing a power cut by weeing over an electric cable!Charlie's voicemail!Elijah thinking Miles is Death!Excellent!

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Awesome update, a very comical read. Love the names of the criminals, Spanner, Wrench lol. Miles getting shot, and how it was still very funny despite him being in pain. Sasha being typical Sash and Xavier trying his upmost to confess his feelings for her. Look forward to more.

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Just caught up on the last two chapters.Oh man.Marvel at the insanity.Loved Casey's "At least you've still got your health", Sid buying the farm next door, Charlie playing Lara Croft and Elijah remembering he's a jujitsu expert.Looking forward to the last one!

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