JosieTash Posted December 16, 2011 Report Posted December 16, 2011 Man !!! That was DARK and sooooooo well done, especially............. I once knew the meaning of this word. I once was able to use the term. Because I had friends, I had great friends, but they never understood me and I still at times felt alone. To compensate for this feeling, I had to inflict a certain pain upon my body to assure myself that I was capable of feeling pain, that I wasn't numb. But then, they discovered me and were naturally horrified. This is my chocolate, this is my coffee. This is my adrenaline rush. As I sit on the bathroom floor, the remaining effects of my fifth adrenaline rush of the day finally wearing off; I can just about hear Mum's Bingo show. Mum is always hoping to get lucky but we're the unluckiest family in the world, so I doubt that she'll ever win anything. Without giving her time to undress, I ripped her clothes open and pushed her up against the wall. She was a smart girl; she knew it would be stupid to object to my actions. As I entered her, I felt the rush become stronger and stronger as she moaned. She moaned so loud, and this encouraged me to push harder and harder. Finally, at the pinnacle point of our exchange, I moaned my loudest yet and then relaxed. I’m soooo NOT of a fan of Xave’s ….and started reading this cos the premise sounded fatalistic. SOOOOO glad I read it though !!!!! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 16, 2011 Report Posted December 16, 2011 I'm a fan of Xavier and you're right, there aren't enough fics of him about.This one was really well written. Quote
Zetti Posted December 16, 2011 Report Posted December 16, 2011 Wow. I actually know what that feels like at times, it is not healthy but that was so raw and honestly you really did do it justice. Well done! x Quote
soph1303 Posted December 16, 2011 Report Posted December 16, 2011 Wow that was a dark, but really well written fic!! Well done !! Quote
Inactive User Posted December 16, 2011 Report Posted December 16, 2011 I have to admit I agree with everyone. It's really such a well-written and amazing but dark oneshot! Well done! *hugs* xx Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted December 16, 2011 Report Posted December 16, 2011 (edited) Deleted. Edited October 5, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote
elikell Posted December 18, 2011 Report Posted December 18, 2011 This was very interesting indeed and is something that noone else has really been able to capture. Very well written and engaging. Deep and dark...but a very good read. Well done Quote
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