Red Ranger 1 Posted January 11, 2011 Report Posted January 11, 2011 Yay, you've started it!Intriguing so far and that preview has definitely caught my interest.Ruby still going around in her underwear is an interesting idea.Shame Roo seems to take after her aunt. Curious about who this boy is(the "Billy" mentioned in the opening?).Looking forward to more! Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted January 11, 2011 Report Posted January 11, 2011 A great start & I really look forward to more. A really gripping chapter, well done. Love Carina xxx Quote
belgshep Posted January 12, 2011 Report Posted January 12, 2011 Great title and great start to your new fic. I love the mystery about that boy who’s lost his memory and Roo’s little hissy fit when she saw Em and Rikki kissing was hilarious. Can’t wait to find out the reason for that wallet with the money and ID being at the bottom of the ocean in those board shorts. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 14, 2011 Author Report Posted January 14, 2011 Some really good stuff in there.Liked Alf and Charlie referring to the boy as "Boy".I'm slightly suspicious of why Billy would want to know Bella's first name and then question her and Rikki about their girlfriends...is there more to him than meets the eye?Also wonder what Ruby was going on about at the end, surprised Charlie jumped down her throat like that.Looking forward to more of this! Quote
belgshep Posted January 15, 2011 Report Posted January 15, 2011 Yeah, it was great when everyone was calling Billy “Boy”, but is he really Billy? Love all that mystery re his school ID and can’t wait to find out more about this mysterious character, even if we have to wait a while. That end comment from Charlie was just priceless – can’t wait to find out what that was all about …. Quote
ScreamingQueen2006 Posted January 16, 2011 Report Posted January 16, 2011 Haha loved the end of the last chapter. I can totally see Ruby saying that. Plus the end line that Charlie said was epic pawnage on Ruby lol Love em both. Looking forward to reading what happens next. Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted January 16, 2011 Report Posted January 16, 2011 Another great chapter. Brilliant stuff. Well done. Fantastic writing. I look forward to more. Love Carina xxx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Posted January 17, 2011 Hmm, so is it really just coincidence that Billy's name comes from a song title or is that not his real name?Wondering if the untimely presence of the full moon is going to become significant... Looking forward to more of this! Quote
ScreamingQueen2006 Posted January 17, 2011 Report Posted January 17, 2011 Really interested to know more about Billy. Love the Charlie/Ruby scenes Look forward to your next update. Quote
Inactive User Posted January 18, 2011 Report Posted January 18, 2011 Great update! Loved it Update soon xx And p.s I thought you may want to know I had updated my fanfic last night, yay! Quote
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