belgshep Posted January 30, 2011 Report Share Posted January 30, 2011 My fave bit of this chapter is the bit where Joey slaps Dex around the face and calls him a little perv, but I did feel a bit sorry for Dex as he was moonstruck when he actually ended up in bed with Joey, although he did know what he was doing when he peeked at Joey naked. Since Dex liked it in onscreen H&A when he was grounded, maybe he’ll be proud of getting slapped by a hot girl like Joey. It’s only going to get worse when Charlie and Sid find out what’s happened …! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 1, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2011 Oh yes.Dexter and Joey's reactions continue to be utterly hilarious, especially Joey wondering which hand on which breast.And the idea of Cleo going to see Adrian at the pet shop is mind-boggling.The town really is full of doubles. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 No, I don't have any problems with the characterisation of Joey.And that flash forward of Nicole has definitely got me intrigued... Nice little chapter, Alf's reaction to the fracas going on was amusing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
callyha Posted February 4, 2011 Report Share Posted February 4, 2011 I do read when you update, I just don't leave a comment! But I will: I love this, its different, funny and clever. lol. and a Jarlie fic too ( I know that's obvious but, yea) lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScreamingQueen2006 Posted February 5, 2011 Report Share Posted February 5, 2011 Sweet chapter. I liked the part at the end. Interested to know what's gonna happen with Martha. Update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
belgshep Posted February 6, 2011 Report Share Posted February 6, 2011 Love that line in Ch 8 where you said Emma & Rikki were bound to be at the diner, swapping insults with Roo & Colleen. He, he. I totally agree with Red Ranger 1 about the bizarre idea of Cleo going to the pet shop and seeing Adrian!!! It’s great that most of the folk in the Diner are supportive of Rikki and Em, even if Roo isn’t, and I loved Alf’s comment about it being another peaceful day in Summer Bay. Great chapters and looking forward to more … Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 Oh boy.Loved the interaction between Ruby and Billy.Be interesting to know if this is something Billy's done before or just him being confused.(Although can't help wondering if it's to do with that flash forward of Nicole...)Looking forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
callyha Posted February 9, 2011 Report Share Posted February 9, 2011 Loved the interaction between Ruby and Billy FUNNY!!! Can't wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
belgshep Posted February 11, 2011 Report Share Posted February 11, 2011 SO funny what you said about imagining how Adrian and Cleo simultaneously fainted when they first met at the pet store. I loved Ruby’s reaction, both times, when she found Billy wearing one of her dresses and it will certainly be interesting to find out WHY (in Ruby’s tone) he’s doing that. I can’t really see Charlie being impressed by Billy’s idea of him wearing Ruby’s dresses and Ruby wearing her underwear, even if they are just in Ruby’s room – actually, I’m quite surprised that Charlie’s letting them share a room, but guess she trusts Ruby. Great pics of the mermaids’ comet-deflecting efforts. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2011 No, I didn't see Flash Forward, I don't tend to watch a lot of television these days for some reason. Well...most of my theories about Billy just went hurtling out the window, I really wasn't expecting him to be a Liagiba.Assuming there's not more to it?Dexter was brilliant again, especially his thoughts about fantasising being too normal and actually being a bit pleased he might have slept with a woman.Looking forward to more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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