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Aaaah, sorry to bore you to sleep but I have some lengthy feedback for you. Sorry. :wink:

That was such a lovely one shot Tele.

It was written so beautifully & the emotions & characterisation was just beautiful & spot on. Perfect.

Miles & Nicole ... not something I expected but it turned out really good.

What with Miles being there for Nicole & Brittany so yeah, I suppose it made a lot of sense.

Poor Brittany though. But I could understand Nic's desperation in wanting to test Beth-Ann.

She only wants what is best for her daughter.

Yet saying that, I could understand Aden & Geoff's point of view in not wanting to test her.

It's such a difficult topic, especially when i involves young children, because it can have so many complications.

Aden & Geoff's relationship was written beautifully.

The fact that they love each other. They're always there for each other.

& yet it was nice to read that there are still rocky moments between the two of them.

Amazingly written Tele & it was just so perfect & beautiful & I really wasn't expecting that storyline either.

But it was written with so much care & it was honestly so fantastic.

Really, really well done.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

Posted

Ahh, that's so emotional and good. I really felt sad when Brittany was ill, god how do people cope with their child having a serious illness. Mild illnesses are bad enough.

Well done, its believable even though I don't usually like Geoff/Aden :)

Posted

I thought that was great was abit shocked with Miles and Nicole being a couple but in a strange way it worked

hate to say because I'm not nomally a guy who gets emotional but I could feel tears in my eyes not saying i cried but was on brink :lol: that will be our Secret oh dam too late :lol:

well done

Posted

Awww that was just lovely!

Miles & Nicole was an unexpected pairing but I can see that it really does work in this case.

Aww all the angsty between the grown-ups and the children :( but it all got better in the end! :wub:

Posted

I liked it.

I was a bit shocked that Miles/Nic are together but it was sweet

Awww Aden/Geoff

Loved this line :lol:

“She has us there.” Geoff murmured. “Still that isn’t nice to blurt out Beth-Ann Jefferies.”

Beth frowned before she gave them her innocent smile.

“Plotting something.” Aden called quietly.

:lol:

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