Georgia Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Aww liked the last two lines, they were sweet. Nice chapter Tele, the interaction between Geoff and Aden was great, especially because Aden doesn't know how to act. It's also nice to see Aden as the girly one.. if that makes sense It did in my head Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Awww, they're actually really cute together in this fic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Georgia Posted October 9, 2009 Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 That was such a cute chapter. I kind of like the awkwardness between Aden and Geoff, it's adorable. And I love Roman in this fic. Oh, and Tele, we are going to have to talk about your ending to Rememberance of Time... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anaya Posted October 9, 2009 Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 (edited) Eeeeeeeeee! You're writing a Gaden fic with a dash of Roman thrown in. All boxes ticked for me. I'm really enjoying reading this so far. Maybe not so much once Nic makes her appearance though. Under normal circumstances I'm a huge Nic lover, but I'm not liking what I read in the summary. The Gaden scenes are too cute. I also like how they are around each other. It's actually a little different to them onscreen, they both come across so sweet & innocent. There's less of Aden's cheekiness, and the tension & clashing that we're more used too, but I still like it. And Roman is written spot on. So clued in & great at giving advice. I love him being there for Aden and I love their relationship. Great stuff, more soon please. Eta: The posts referring to ROT have been moved to the appropriate thread. Edited October 9, 2009 by Anaya Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scotcaz22 Posted October 9, 2009 Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 Ohhhh a Geoff/Aden story! I love it! And I like Roman giving out sound advice to Aden and Geoff. Although, I don't like the sound of Nicole appearing... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted October 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 Aww That was agood chapter! there seems to be a cute awkward ness! i like it! Update soon! El x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 That was very Aden the way he spoke to Bartlett.Loved his little chat with Roman, the banter between them about allowances and chores was great. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Georgia Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Typical bad boy Aden, with the reaction to Bartlett. I also loved the interaction between Roman and Aden, it was so natural and well written. Update soon Tele. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scotcaz22 Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Excellent update! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted October 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 I loved Aden's reaction, I loved the old him hehe! Aww and that was so sweet, Roman his guardian! Aww! El x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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