Barbara Posted June 2, 2010 Report Share Posted June 2, 2010 Angelo found Charlie! Thank God! The kids in your fics are the cutest kids ever. Princess Jessica! And Ben loves big red trucks! I was a bit surprised at Ava's outburst but I can understand that she wants to see her mum and she's going to apologise to Leah so that's good. Please tell me James sped off very very far away from the Bay. More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carywary Posted June 2, 2010 Report Share Posted June 2, 2010 finally worked out how to reply without quoting! anoher brilliant chapter, it was nice to see ruby getting along well with ava and ben, and how angelo and Charlie were both prepared to risk their lives to save the other, it just shows how much they love each other.this would be a great storyline on the show, keep it up!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hannah-K Posted June 2, 2010 Report Share Posted June 2, 2010 im glad charlie's ok! the kids in this are so cute! cant wait to read more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted June 2, 2010 Report Share Posted June 2, 2010 Great chapter. Loved it More soon please x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted June 3, 2010 Report Share Posted June 3, 2010 Aww such a cute update! Jessica is soo cute! Poor Ava, she must find evrything so hard right now! El x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laura158 Posted June 4, 2010 Report Share Posted June 4, 2010 Great update! So glad Angelo was okay and that he saved Charlie! The kids are so cute, and I can't blame Ava for wanting to see her mum! It would be very stressful for both Ava and Ben because they're so young and don't fully understand. Looks like Ruby's sorted herself out and is now looking after Ava, Ben and Calumn! But she just left Calumn with Nicole and Geoff to go and get Ava and Ben- then went straight to the hospital! Fantastic Work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ashleyjane Posted June 4, 2010 Report Share Posted June 4, 2010 I really loved ava missing her mum that wwas so cute keep it up post soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ashleyjane Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 I'm glad charlie gets to go home :cool: And is charlie not wanting angelo in the room because she's burnt And that docters mean Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 Great chapter. More soon please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carywary Posted June 5, 2010 Report Share Posted June 5, 2010 Brilliant, lovely to see them all like a wee happy family. I wish Charlie would let angelo see her burns, of course she would have burns but angelo wouldn't mind, I can understand that she wouldn't want the kids to see her like this but angelo loves her so much and she was trying to save his life! please update soon, keep up the great work!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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