callyha Posted June 9, 2010 Report Share Posted June 9, 2010 Great update! Poor Ruby More soon please! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freckleface Posted June 9, 2010 Report Share Posted June 9, 2010 Aaaaw, that made me chuckle when Angelo shouted using Ben's full name ;D And the conversationg between Charlie and Ruby was really... nice as well More soon please! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carywary Posted June 11, 2010 Report Share Posted June 11, 2010 Wow!! That was such a heated argument, and the finish, you wrote it so well! It was so sad when Ruby was looking at the family but I'm looking forward to seeing who this new guy is! Thankyou and keep it up xo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
callyha Posted June 11, 2010 Report Share Posted June 11, 2010 Intense argument! Its great lol. Hope Charlie keeps the baby... Can't believe Angelo said that to her! Who's chatting to Rubes? More soon please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charmed60 Posted June 11, 2010 Report Share Posted June 11, 2010 Oh wow that was fantastic Danni! I love the way you've written it so that it's not actually one sided, there's no good guy or bad guy but instead I can see both sides of the argument. It's a shock for Charlie and of course she ultimately has the right to choose whether to terminate the pregnancy or not because it's her body but it's also sad for Angelo because even though he wants the baby it could be taken away from him and that must be hard for him to understand; especially because he's happy with the idea. I didn't agree with what he said about Ruby being the one who should be terminated but I can understand that he's angry and also how difficult it must be for him to understand that she would keep the pregnancy going but the man who raped her yet might not for her husband. Very interesting can't wait to see where you go with this and also intrigued who the man is Ruby was talking to! He seemed a little too intense! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted June 11, 2010 Report Share Posted June 11, 2010 Great chapter Wondering who the man is talking to Ruby?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laura158 Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 Great update! The man Ruby was talking to was interesting.. want to find some more about him. Charlie and Angelo's arguement over the baby was a shame but I can see both points of view...Angelo's last comment was a taking it a little too far I think. Hope they come to some resolution.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
charlie29 Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 oooh great chapter. Hope Charlie decides to keep the baby, and she and Angelo make up soon....... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted June 12, 2010 Report Share Posted June 12, 2010 I missed a few chapters. I loved the little scene with Ava and Ben talking about school. I had to laugh when Angelo shouted Ben's full name. It reminded me of the time Charlie shouted Ava's full name and Ben said she was in trouble or something like that. Ruby kissed Geoff! I didn't see that one coming. I hope Nicole won't find out because she won't like that. It didn't look like Geoff felt the same way though so that's good. I can understand why Ruby thinks it's too soon to like someone else but love happens when you least expect it. Sometimes it takes years to move on and like someone else, sometimes it only takes a few months. Charlie is pregnant! That was an intense argument. I wonder how they'll work things out and if she'll keep the baby. More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carywary Posted June 14, 2010 Report Share Posted June 14, 2010 Oh I'm so glad Charlie is going to keep the baby, for a while i thought she was going to have an abortion but that's good news. great update as usual. I loved their wee scene on the beach. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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