Georgia Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Wow, I loved that. I'm not exactly a Lucas and Mattie fan (I know someone who is though ) and I opened it because I saw you were writing it... good choice The song lyrics were perfect, the descriptions were perfect, everything was perfect Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Wow, I loved that. I'm not exactly a Lucas and Mattie fan (I know someone who is though ) and I opened it because I saw you were writing it... good choice The song lyrics were perfect, the descriptions were perfect, everything was perfect HI RIGHT HERE! I loved it Jen You wrote it so perfectly, even if in the end she was married to Ric, your first love will always hold a special place in your heart beautifully written, and I loved the title of it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Great fiction Jen Awesome writing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TelephotoMarigold Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 Ah.....This was a nice story... I really liked it! Tele Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 (edited) That was utterly brilliant.That's exactly how I can imagine Matilda feeling about both of them and it summed up her and Lucas' relationship really well, that it wasn't meant to last but it was special to both of them.The flashbacks fitted in really nicely and brought back a lot of memories. Edited November 1, 2009 by Red Ranger 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 That one-shot was amazing and beautifully written. You wrote Matilda's feelings for both of them really well. I like how Mattie finally had the closure she needed and deserved. It didn’t matter to him that she was still thinking about him. He knew that the boy whom she fell in love with at fifteen would always hold a special place in her heart. All that mattered was that she was happy. I loved that part! Lucas was her first love and she will never forget him but Ric is the love of her life who she married. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leylaa; Posted November 1, 2009 Report Share Posted November 1, 2009 Wow,, I loved it Jen! It's amzingly written It didn’t matter to him that she was still thinking about him. He knew that the boy whom she fell in love with at fifteen would always hold a special place in her heart. All that mattered was that she was happy. Love that bit! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbi615 Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 I love the part Barbara and Leyla quoted coz it's too cute! The song lyrics fitted the fic perfectly, just brilliant! Amazing one-shot Jen! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MatildaHunterFan Posted April 3, 2012 Report Share Posted April 3, 2012 Just saw this now, AMAZING Jen!! You're an awesome writer, the story is so beautiful, perfectly desciribed by you..... Just adorable. A line that made me smile: "Coz when you're fifteen and somebody tells you they love you, you're gonna believe them......" I love that song! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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