TelephotoMarigold Posted September 2, 2009 Report Posted September 2, 2009 Wow Good start! Keep going.... Love Tele xx Quote
Barbara Posted September 2, 2009 Report Posted September 2, 2009 Great start Danni! Charlie is pregnant? That's really bad timing! I hope she is going to keep the baby and will be able to find a way to tell Angelo. I really liked the interaction between Charlie and Ruby. It was very sweet! It looks like they're getting along again. “I love you babe” Angelo said, and he pulled her close for one last kiss. “I love you too Angelo. Goodbye” “No.....it’s not goodbye. It’s see you later.” “See you later, Mr Rosetta” Charlie said, through floods of tears “See you later, Mrs Rosetta” Angelo said, as he was led away by the officers. I love this part. More please. Quote
tessalove Posted September 2, 2009 Report Posted September 2, 2009 Wow! Really good start! Im really glad you started a fic! Its really good so far! Hope Charlie keeps the baby! And everything is ok! Continue soon!! El x Quote
KirstyEkua Posted September 2, 2009 Report Posted September 2, 2009 Even though i'm not a fan of Charlie/Angelo i really enjoyed this!! It's well written and a really exciting first chapter! I'm glad Charlie and Ruby are working things out as i've always loved their relationship and i hope they can get past what's happened. And Charlie having a baby, wonder how that'll turn out. Keep it up, can't wait for the next part. Good job! Quote
charmed60 Posted September 2, 2009 Report Posted September 2, 2009 Wow really good start, you're a brill writer, looking forward to reading more! Quote
Inactive User Posted September 3, 2009 Report Posted September 3, 2009 Great start! I am not a fan of Charlie/Angelo. But I love this fanfiction and would love to read more soon please Quote
TelephotoMarigold Posted September 3, 2009 Author Report Posted September 3, 2009 Great Chapter. You've captured the characters well. I like it. Can't wait to read more..... Love Tele xx Quote
tessalove Posted September 4, 2009 Report Posted September 4, 2009 Uh oh!!! That ws a really good chapter! Can't wait to see what happens to them! Lol El x Quote
tessalove Posted September 4, 2009 Report Posted September 4, 2009 Oh....... Poor Ruby!! I really really hope she's ok!! El x Quote
Inactive User Posted September 5, 2009 Report Posted September 5, 2009 Loving this fanfiction. Nice work Awww the ending with Charlie and Ruby-so sweet and beautiful. More soon please Quote
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