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Great start Danni! :D

:o Charlie is pregnant? That's really bad timing! :( I hope she is going to keep the baby and will be able to find a way to tell Angelo.

I really liked the interaction between Charlie and Ruby. It was very sweet! It looks like they're getting along again.

“I love you babe” Angelo said, and he pulled her close for one last kiss.

“I love you too Angelo. Goodbye”

“No.....it’s not goodbye. It’s see you later.”

“See you later, Mr Rosetta” Charlie said, through floods of tears

“See you later, Mrs Rosetta” Angelo said, as he was led away by the officers.

I love this part. :wub:

More please.

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Even though i'm not a fan of Charlie/Angelo i really enjoyed this!! :D It's well written and a really exciting first chapter! I'm glad Charlie and Ruby are working things out as i've always loved their relationship and i hope they can get past what's happened.

And Charlie having a baby, wonder how that'll turn out. Keep it up, can't wait for the next part. Good job! :wub:

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