bradyell Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Louise that was brill I love how you never fail to surprise - nothing is ever what it seems!! And even though they both married other people Adelle still really love each other Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 Oh...my...Yes, yes, yes and double yes!Geoff's married to Belle!Aden's married to Nicole!Jai and Annie have a sex life!Why isn't the show live this?!And it was really well written, all the characters' reactions were just perfect(loved Annie hugging Aden), I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks, Louise. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted June 13, 2009 Report Share Posted June 13, 2009 (edited) Oh...my...Yes, yes, yes and double yes!Geoff's married to Belle!Aden's married to Nicole!Jai and Annie have a sex life!Why isn't the show live this?!And it was really well written, all the characters' reactions were just perfect(loved Annie hugging Aden), I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks, Louise. Lol I knew I could at least rely on you to like it. Tbh I have NO idea where it came from and I don't technically agree with the pairings, it just happened. And I'm with Geoff, Annie wouldn't do that! Edited June 13, 2009 by Louise_2983 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lino Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 That is a suprising story, but loved it. Very well written. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Oh wow! I loved how you done something different. Aden/Nicole, Geoff/Belle I've always wondered what Gelle would be like together very nicely done, and Belle's drunken rampage about Annie and Jai having sex was just fantastic Very well done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Wow, this was fantastic Geoff/Belle, I was all for them months ago, but it never happened *sigh* Pleasantly startled she responded, looping her arms around his neck and kissing him back hungrily as the elegant place card bearing the name “Isabelle Campbell” in delicate script fluttered unnoticed to the marble floor. That was a great closing sentence. You are very talented Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 I liked reading this, it was great Louise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HAA Girl 08 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Um, WOW! Loved Belle's drunken rant! Brilliant, just brilliant! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 Thanks guys To be honest I was worried no one would reply to this given the somewhat erm... unconventional pairings I had intended this to be a one shot but I've had an idea for a mini sequel so look out for it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hitmanfan Posted June 14, 2009 Report Share Posted June 14, 2009 HOw do you keep coming up with these stories ? and with so many going on at once, brilliant. !! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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