**Julie** Posted March 16, 2009 Report Posted March 16, 2009 Great chapter. I hope Charlie's OK. Update soon. Quote
Mia; Posted March 16, 2009 Report Posted March 16, 2009 Great Chapter I hope Charlie's okay This is such a good story, Update soon Quote
Laura Posted March 16, 2009 Author Report Posted March 16, 2009 Wow! Already our fics are so different. It's really good. I loved it. Didn't expect that to happen. Can't wait for more Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 16, 2009 Report Posted March 16, 2009 Gosh, that was good.Really exciting what's happening to Charlie, want to see what happens next. Quote
Inactive User Posted March 16, 2009 Report Posted March 16, 2009 Good work, Kevin! Keep up with the good work. Update soon. I am off to read Laura's version Quote
Laura Posted March 17, 2009 Author Report Posted March 17, 2009 (edited) Its really good! I love it. Can't wait to see where you take this Edited March 17, 2009 by homeandawayxoxo Quote
-Kevin- Posted March 17, 2009 Report Posted March 17, 2009 sexyluc said: Thank you Laura, Red Ranger and Sarah Chapter 3 The bullet had missed Charlie's head by a sliver. If she hadnt jumped for cover the bullet would have ripped through her body. As Charlie turned she saw her one of her captors standing on top of a hill with a sniper rifle sitting in his hands. Both women got up and ran and didnt stop running until they were far far away. They stopped moving as soon as the darkness began to fall. The pair were happy to spot a little shack down by the river. "Do you think we will be safe in there until morning" Sarah inquired "Well all I know is I need rest. My feet are killing me" Charlie insisted After some talking they both decided it would be best if they stayed there until first light. Little knowing that the night ahead would change their lives forever..... "Hi Alf , its just me Roman , you havent heard from Martha have you ? " Roman spoke into the phone "Yeah shes here with me" Alf replied "Oh thanks Alf . Does she want me to pick her up" Roman asked "no its ok I will mate dont worry about it, shes going to stay with me tonight at the caravan park" Alf explained "Oh" Roman added confusedly "righteo mate I'll talk to you tomorrow" Alf said Roman put down the phone and just stood rooted to the spot. Then his eyes turned to focus on the family picture that was hanging on the wall. Then he looked to the floor and began to sob. "Thanks for letting me stay tonight grandad" Martha said "Dont worry about it love" Alf reassured her "I just dont feel happy with my relationship with Roman at the moment.and theres other things that have been weighing on my mind as well grandad." Martha confessed "You can tell me anything love you know that " Alf professed "I've had some tests done recently and they came across some abnormalities in my blood" She admitted "Grandad its the cancer again" she said as she fought back tears "Strewth love and your only telling me this now. How long have you known ?" " A week now" "Im so scared grandad. and I dont know what to do" "For starters I think you should tell Roman because you're going to need his support" Alf recommended "Thats the thing. I dont want his support" "If I let him look after me it will feel like all Jack did for me when I was sick the first time will be erased. and I cant do that" She said as she began to cry Alf looked into her eyes and saw the pain that lay within them, and put his arms around her. "I just miss Jack so much , he was my one true love and I could never love Roman the way I loved Jack. He was my world. He was my whole life" "I know love" Alf sighed "What if I die grandad. What will happen to Jack and Brooke?" "You're gona give this fight the best shot you can give it you hear. You need to keep strong and you will beat it. Just stay positive." Alf stormed "OK grandad , I will give it everything I've got. I am a Stewart after all" she joked Alf smiled back at her and they both decided it was getting late and they needed some rest. Angelo was frantic with worry because it had been over 24 hours since he last heard from Charlie and he had rung every single person she knows but nobody had heard from her and then he had that mysterious phonecall which was being traced as he was driving around looking for her. He just knew in his heart that Charlie was in terrible danger. It was a gut feeling . But at the same time he felt that she was still alive. As he drove he saw a dark figure running from the caravan park and he swerved to avoid the figure narrowly missing a tree but he was ok and that was the main thing.He stepped from his navy blue car to see if there was anybody around but he was alone in the darkness . He heard a rustling sound coming from the nearby bushes and he crept towards the origin of the noise when suddenly he heard aother much louder noise of someone running behind him and all of a sudden someone had something over his face and he blacked out...... What happened to Angelo ? Will Martha confess to Roman about her condition ? Will Charlie and her friend make it home alive ? Thanks Laura !! Yeah if only you would only hurry up and write the next chapter of your fic Quote
Laura Posted March 17, 2009 Author Report Posted March 17, 2009 Kevin, be patient. Perfection takes time Quote
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