xknomex Posted February 23, 2009 Report Posted February 23, 2009 awww I really loved that chapter!!! Nicole and Geoff are so sweet, I'm actually really enjoying reading Aden and Ruby as a couple, which really surprises me! lol LOVED the chat Belle and Aden had at the end. i'm so glad they can talk to each other!!! xx Quote
Inactive User Posted February 23, 2009 Report Posted February 23, 2009 Great chapter-loved it:) Loving Geoff and Nicole, Aden and Ruby together Liked the sibling scene between Aden and Belle Update soon Quote
LAURZY! Posted February 24, 2009 Author Report Posted February 24, 2009 Awww! lol Geoff is the sweetest person ever! i loved what he said to Larry, his and belle'd relationship is so nice to see/read And she's had the baby!! love the name Emily cant wait to read more Quote
wrongturntaken Posted February 24, 2009 Report Posted February 24, 2009 That was great! I loved the start with Aden and Ruby! Aden's reaction to the baby was great too! I love the realtionship Belle and Aden seem to have now. It was nice she took her daughter to see Larry and i'm glad Geoff went with her. He said exactly the right things. Update soon! Quote
cicerid Posted February 24, 2009 Report Posted February 24, 2009 Great update! I'm really enjoying Aden and Ruby too. It was a nice touch to bring Larry back into the picture and I love the feeling of family/community you've given to the characters. They all interact so well with one another. As I've mentioned before, the writers should come in here to get some inspiration for good and engaging storylines with a happy ending. Quote
Inactive User Posted February 24, 2009 Report Posted February 24, 2009 Great chapter. Glad Belle has the baby and loved the name Emily-so cute Loved how you brought Larry in. I liked the Geoff/Belle relationship. Update soon Quote
steff99 Posted February 24, 2009 Report Posted February 24, 2009 (edited) Ah great chapter! Update soon Edited February 24, 2009 by steff99 Quote
Inactive User Posted February 26, 2009 Report Posted February 26, 2009 Loved the last chapter. Thanks for sharing this fanfiction with us. Great work, mate. Can't wait to read a new fanfiction from you very soon Quote
wrongturntaken Posted February 26, 2009 Report Posted February 26, 2009 That was THE perfect ending! The baptism was lovely and sweet. I'm really glad Gaz got there and i liked how you had him and Ric interrupt, it added a bit of comedy which was a nice touch in the final chapter. Belle and Gaz's talk was great too. I feel like you dealt with all the themes of this fic really well and i love how you managed to change the character's relationships to each other and make it work in what seemed like the right time. I really do like all your fics, you're a great writer! Hope you write another soon! Quote
cicerid Posted February 26, 2009 Report Posted February 26, 2009 Lovely ending Red Ranger. Really beautifully written, the whole story. Hope we'll see more of this kind of stuff from you. Until then, see you on some other thread! Quote
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