LAURZY! Posted February 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2009 So glad Nicole did and said what she said!!! Loved Aden for being honest with Ruby and she seems so mature for her age Belle and Annie's scene was really sweet I must say, considering you dont like Aden and Belle you are writing them so nicely!! i love the way your writing all the characters to be honest, really well written Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
homeandawayforever23 Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 Great chapter. The Annie and Belle scene was sweet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 I must say, considering you dont like Aden and Belle you are writing them so nicely!! i love the way your writing all the characters to be honest, really well written Well, at the risk of sounding pompous, that's kind of one of my increasingly large number of rules:No character assassinations.Just because I don't like someone doesn't mean everyone else suddenly has to hate them.Glad you're still liking it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 Great chapter. Aden and Ruby-so lovely and mature together Loving the sisterly scene between Belle and Annie Update soon please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 I think that was my favourite chapter so far! The Aden/Ruby scene was sweet and meaningful, i do really like their relationship. Belle looking through the photos and contemplating her family history was really nice to see, especially the bit about her grandmother, and i like how she's trying to get used to saying 'our dad'. Geoff and Nicole's scene was great. It felt really in character, and i love the way they both reacted to everything. Great job! Can't wait for another update! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted February 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 That last line cracked me up i could just imagine it! Loved the whole scene with Geoff and Nicole, what Geoff said made alot of sense and was very sweet The rest aswell was great as per! Looking forward to more... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 Loved it. The end cracked me up Nicole and Geoff-so sweet Enjoyed the rest of the chapter. A great read Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 Loved this chapter! The Aden/Ruby scene was so sweet! Ruby getting rid of Melody was very funny! I loved her and Annie's talk! Geoff and Nicole's talk was sweet too! I'm glad they're moving forward. Update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cicerid Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Was away the whole of last week so I had to do a bit of catching up. I have really enjoyed the last few chapters. Good writing as usual of both the plot and the characters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted February 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Loved how they all interacted and i'm really glad Aden and Belle are more comfortable around each other, their scene at the end was so sweet Ruby & Aden and Geoff & Nicole are so sweet The dialogue, once again, was brilliant! Cant wait to read more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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