LAURZY! Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 yay!!! so glad you started this The ending was so sweet, i loved how nervous Aden was And Amanda's in it Even though i know somewhere down the line its not gonna be all happy for them lol i really am looking forward to reading more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 Yes, Red Ranger you've finally done it! Written something I like. Good Job, please continue writing!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 This is great! I really like your fics! My heart nearly stopped when Aden made the comment about the baby photos, for a milisecond i thought it was funny and then i realised just before you wrote it. I'm glad Amanda kind of skimmed over it though. That was really sweet at the end with the photo. Can't wait for more! update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HAA Girl 08 Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Red Ranger, this is sounding really good! Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 I havent really read any of your fics but I had to read this one, I love the fact you introduced Amanda into it and Irene trying to keep any awkwardness out.. I know there will be drama down the line but I will look forward to reading this fic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 Thanks for all your comments, everyone, hope you stay with this fiction.I think I'm probably one of the few people who'd start a fiction with Aden and Belle happy and together and go downhill from there... I am one of those people I love drama in fics. I loved several parts of this fic. It was really well written. “So what’s Belle’s mum like?”asked Nicole.Geoff and Annie had met up with her and Jai at the Diner after being summarily evicted from the house. “Actually, she reminded me a bit of your mum,”Geoff told her,“Bit more subdued though.” “Belle and I come from the same genetic stock?That thought’s gonna give me nightmares.” “I didn’t even know Belle had a mum,”Jai commented. Everyone shot him curious looks.“How could she not have a mum?”asked Annie,“You don’t still believe in that stork story, do you?” “You did,”Geoff reminded her. This was cute, they never really have conversations like this on the show and I wish they did! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 should i be worried that Aden and Belle are brother and sister :unsure: brilliant update xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted January 28, 2009 Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 I was thinking the brother and sister thing too... you wouldn't would you? It would be interesting if you did though, not that i'd like it, but... I suppose it has been done before on haa so there's no reason why you can't, lol. Great chapter again! I love all the dialouge, you write the humour into it really nicely! Update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted January 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 No!!! they cant be brother and sister i think i'd be sick, i really....no..... I'm kinda intrigued lol i just dont know if i wanna know Loved the dialogue between Geoff and everyone, really well done I'm kinda looking forward to reading more haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 *Eyes Widen* I am very intrigued as to what it is that Larry & Amanda are keeping from Aden & Belle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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