Guest Posted December 19, 2008 Report Posted December 19, 2008 Story Title: Belle's heartache Type of story: Long fan fiction Main Characters: Belle BTTB rating: G Genre: There isn't really one Does story include spoilers: No Any warnings: No Summary: Can't give one without giving it away Belle looked down at the baby girl was holding she looked so much like her father Aden who had run away from it all and ended up getting hit by a car. Belle wasn't sure she could raise her baby girl on her own so she asked Irene to help her. Belle's heart was aching every day that went by without Aden. She looked down at her beautiful baby girl and thought of Aden. Belle thought of reasons why he would run away from it all and the little bundle of joy they gave life to. Belle let a tear slide down her cheek as she looked at their baby girl she had named Isabella Aden Jeffries. She knew that if Aden was her he would have approved of that name for their baby. Belle stood there looking out the window and thought of how cruel this world could be she had lost the one thing she loved apart from their baby girl. Belle continued to look out the window she stood there and cried because she was so heart broken that Aden was missing out on their baby girl's life. Belle turned around and nearly jumped out of her skin. "Irene you scared me" Belle said "Sorry love" Irene answered "I can’t believe how much she looks like Aden" Belle whispered "I know" Irene replied Belle stood there holding on to the only thing she had left.
LAURZY! Posted December 19, 2008 Report Posted December 19, 2008 Awww Aden died?!! Good start hun, cant wait to read more
Taniya_K Posted December 19, 2008 Report Posted December 19, 2008 I can't believe that Aden's dead! Great start, but it's so sad. Poor Belle. I love the name for their daughter, though. I can totally imagine it. Cannot wait for the next part. xoxo
xknomex Posted December 19, 2008 Report Posted December 19, 2008 awww poor Belle! I cant believe Aden died brilliant start update soon xx
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 19, 2008 Report Posted December 19, 2008 Gosh, really interesting, looking forward to reading more.
homeandawayforever23 Posted December 19, 2008 Report Posted December 19, 2008 Great start. I can't believe Aden's dead! Poor Belle. Looking forward to reading more.
Inactive User Posted December 19, 2008 Report Posted December 19, 2008 Great start. Poor Belle. No! Aden dead?? Update soon
Guest Posted December 26, 2008 Report Posted December 26, 2008 Chapter 2 Belle fell asleep and saw Aden’s face but she knew it wasn’t real because he was gone all she had left was Isabella. Belle knew she was dreaming and when she woke up her pillow soaked and she knew she had been crying. She looked over at their daughter Isabella who was fast asleep. Belle sat on the floor and pulled out the photo album that she had made before Isabella was born and before Aden died. She sat their and looked at all the pictures of her and Aden she let a tear slide down her cheek. Irene came upstairs to check on Belle and found her on the floor looking through old photo albums and crying. “It just doesn’t seem real” Belle said “I know love but realty is it is real” Irene answered “I know but it’s just not the same without Aden” Belle said “I know” Irene responded Irene got up to leave the room. “Irene will you take us to Aden’s grave tomorrow?” Belle asked “Sure love” Irene responded “Night” Belle told Irene “Night love” Irene responded Belle cried herself to sleep.
Adelle2008 Posted December 26, 2008 Report Posted December 26, 2008 I think this concept is really sweet, Belle is left to look after her daughter by herself. I think you should add a bit more in your chapters. Its a great start though. Please continue! I look forward to see where this is going.
LAURZY! Posted December 26, 2008 Report Posted December 26, 2008 awww poor Belle! Looking forward to reading more
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