whispered_envy Posted December 16, 2008 Report Posted December 16, 2008 Wow! That is such a sad and emotional beginning...it'll be interesting to see how they all handle her death. Great start! Quote
LAURZY! Posted December 16, 2008 Report Posted December 16, 2008 Awww wow Looking forward to see where you go with this Quote
Inactive User Posted December 16, 2008 Report Posted December 16, 2008 whoa interesting start. Please keep on writing this story. Update soon Quote
xknomex Posted December 16, 2008 Report Posted December 16, 2008 wow! That was written so well! Such a sad opening, cant wait for more. update soon x Quote
Anaya Posted December 16, 2008 Report Posted December 16, 2008 Great start. I loved the descriptive approach you took to writing this fic. Even though not many words were spoken, I could really feel the emotions of each character and the situation they were in. Everything was all the more detailed and I could picture the scene. Oh no... Nic's gone. I'll miss reading your Nic/Aden interaction, you write it so well. Maybe there'll be some flashback scenes. Please. Look forward to reading more. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 16, 2008 Report Posted December 16, 2008 Oh my...Looking forward to reading more. Quote
Lise Posted December 17, 2008 Report Posted December 17, 2008 I liked both of those chapters. Nicole's funny asking if Roman wants scented candles! Quote
Inactive User Posted December 17, 2008 Report Posted December 17, 2008 I liked it. Nicole is funny, lol. Update soon Quote
LAURZY! Posted December 17, 2008 Report Posted December 17, 2008 Awww Nicole Loved how she asked if they wanted scented or normal candles Cant wAit for more Quote
xknomex Posted December 17, 2008 Report Posted December 17, 2008 poor Nicole! haha scented or normal candles Update soon xxx Quote
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