dee83 Posted February 3, 2009 Report Share Posted February 3, 2009 Glad it worked out just hope it stays that way just the 3 of them and maybe some others along the way Update Soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 Great chapter. JNM-so cute and lovely Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nourtz Posted February 4, 2009 Report Share Posted February 4, 2009 that was a great chapter i am really enjoying please update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Aww A proposal He is so cute Charlie had better not ruin anything! Update soon? x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee White Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 -whoop-! Love certainly is in the air! Cant wait for the next chap, Kaiya! So sorry for the short review, got to go out! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 They're so cute together. Aww he proposed! Don't tell me I'm going to have to kick Charlie's butt! She'd better stay away. More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted February 11, 2009 Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 Great chapter. What the heck was Charlie doing here?? Hope she won't try to come between JNM. Maybe she had a connection to Sam??? Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted February 11, 2009 Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 That chapter was just so Jack is funny when he is drunk. He shouldn't mention S** though. “You’re so…”, Jack grabbed her cheeks as he tried to think of the write words. “…Smart, talented, beautiful-”, she tried to finish off his sentence. He lost his vocabulary, she had to help him finding the right words. “Noo not the light”, Jack screeched as the sunlight hit his eyes. “Shut the blinds, shut the blinds!” Martha shook her head discustingly as she quickly closed the blinds. Then making her way over towards the bed, where Jack was now fully under the covers. “You know, people say the best thing about being with the person you love is you get to wake up to your husband every single morning…”, she knelt down closer to the blanket covering his head. “I have to disagree”, she laughed slightly. Hearing this, Jack pulled the cover down abruptly, looking at Martha with a smirk on his face. “Oh don’t be like that”, he told her, still squinting slightly from the sun. Love that part, especially “Shut the blinds, shut the blinds!” That chapter was great until Charlie showed up. She can date Roman. Next chapter will be the last one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaiyaBlake Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 (edited) What the heck was Charlie doing here?? Hope she won't try to come between JNM. Maybe she had a connection to Sam??? I can safely say she had no connection to Sam! I hate Sam . I didn't want to resurrect her in this fic hahaha. Thanks for your guys comments though Edited February 12, 2009 by KaiyaBlake Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stephyrose4 Posted February 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Awww! Isn't Jack like the sweetest thing in history! J&M for that matter ... God Charlie, F**k off will you. No one wants you! Oh no, its the 2nd to last chapter. Aw! Gay. You should so do another J&M fic, or a Edward & Bella fic for fanfiction.net since you can't post any other fics on here except Home and Away ones . (Do you even like Twilight ? haha) Anyway loved the chapter, it was halrious! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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