-Jade- Posted August 6, 2007 Report Share Posted August 6, 2007 (edited) Awww - it's nearly the end. How sad. But on the bright side J&M are being adorable. Wow, Jack really worships that girl. lol The number of references to 'angels' when he looks at her! Well, it's sweet. Can't wait for the last chapter (but at the same time I really can, since I don't want it to end) - I know it'll be great. You better be writing another fic after this Rach or I'll come after you. Be warned. Edited August 6, 2007 by -Jade- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted August 6, 2007 Report Share Posted August 6, 2007 She was going to make us all wait for this Awwww its over *sheads tears* Im going to miss it!!!!!!!! There getting married!!!!!! yay There going to make a baby Post a sequal Well this is the part I would say update soon lol But I cant sooo Well done im going to miss it!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bay girl Posted August 7, 2007 Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 Oh, i loved it. That was so sweet. Aww, a little baby Holden. So cute. Great fic Rach. Well, except the first horrid part with Martha and Hugh. LOL. Can't wait to read a new fic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted August 7, 2007 Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 “Let’s make a baby” she giggled… That cracked me up, i dont know why, but i cant stop laughing at it I guess im just high Such a beautiful chapter. Its amazing that only a few days ago that were yelling at each other, and now they are engaged and making itty bitty Baby Holdens I love Jack and Martha <33 But its all finished now Another brilliant fic Now for the new one -angelic look- Great work Rach Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted August 7, 2007 Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 its over but it was brilliant loved the last chapter it was sooooo cute can't wait for your next one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted August 7, 2007 Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 N'aawwww a marriage and baby! How adorable, i love this Jack and Martha I don't want it to end now Well done Rachel, this has been a great fic except for the Martha/Hugh stuff, that definately scarred me for life This fic throughout the begining made me angrier than i think a fic ever has, but i still loved it But I have definately enjoyed reading especially all the last few chapter with the Jack and Martha fluff Can't wait for your newest one to come out! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
holden_girl9051 Posted August 7, 2007 Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 Aww its over That was such a cute ending I loved it so much Can't wait for your next fic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted August 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 That was so adorable They're getting married and they're going to have a lickle baby..it's soo cute! Now they can live happily ever after. You wrote it all so well, I can't wait for your new one! Oh Rach...ever heard of an epilogue? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted August 7, 2007 Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 (edited) :wub: Ok, so I used up practically all of the available smileys, but it was worth it, because that was adorable. The proposal took me by surprise! Very, erm, quick, but totally romantic. All I can say now is... HA HA HUGH!!! Fabulous writing Rach, I really can't wait til the next story - don't leave it too long! Oh yea, and one other thing, you make me laugh. Near the beggining you put 'know' instead of 'no', and later on you put 'no' instead of 'know'. I think you'll get what I mean. Edited August 7, 2007 by -Jade- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vale4eva Posted August 7, 2007 Report Share Posted August 7, 2007 ^^Shuddup It was 11pm when I wrote that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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