Tasha Posted November 6, 2007 Report Posted November 6, 2007 The kitchen scene, someone barging in to tell them its cake time, its de ja vu all over again Great chapter though Just kiss her and get it over with bum head More please Quote
Channy!!! Posted November 6, 2007 Report Posted November 6, 2007 GREAT CHAPTER.. as others have said they really do have great chemistry. Hope they end the night together they are sooo meant to be. The watch and the inscription on it was so nawwww... beautiful. Thanks for the update, look forward to one soon haha. Channy Xx Quote
Channy!!! Posted November 6, 2007 Report Posted November 6, 2007 GREAT CHAPTER.. as others have said they really do have great chemistry. Hope they end the night together they are sooo meant to be. The watch and the inscription on it was so nawwww... beautiful. Thanks for the update, look forward to one soon haha. Channy Xx Quote
beckyboo Posted November 7, 2007 Report Posted November 7, 2007 Hey Rach!!! As you can see iv surived my 1st 2days Anways! That was a great chapter!!!!!!!! Cant wait for the next one Update soon Hope to talk soon xxx Quote
dolly-999 Posted November 7, 2007 Report Posted November 7, 2007 vale4eva said: Looking at the watch closer, he read the inscription that was secretly hidden away on the under-side, placed there for Jacks eyes only… To my best friend and one true love. Forever yours, Martha xxx aww . vale4eva said: Finally gathering the courage to face it, he spoke up, “You know” he hesitantly began, “I actually wanted to …” “Come on you guys! It’s cake time!” Tasha popped her head around the corner at just the wrong time. Jack rolled his eyes out of sight … And the worst timing in the world award goes too … Stupid Tash, why'd she have to walk in right when they were finally talking to eachother. vale4eva said: There was only one thing he would wish for right now! With one long and breath-filled blow, he blew away the vibrant coloured flames. He better be wishing that Martha would trust him, hopefully they'll both realise soon that they're ment to be together. Loving this fic Rach, hope to read more soon. Your doing an awsome job. Quote
bay girl Posted November 7, 2007 Report Posted November 7, 2007 Tasha you big butt. How dare you ruin the moment. Arghh. I hope this is the lead-up to them getting back together, coz they need to get a wriggle on. Great chapter Rach. Can't wait for more. Im sad that this is coming to an end. Quote
bizkit01 Posted November 7, 2007 Report Posted November 7, 2007 That was FANTASTIC !!! Bay Girl, i'm sad too!! this fic is so good. I hate to see it end. Quote
vale4eva Posted November 7, 2007 Report Posted November 7, 2007 Thanks everyone Apologises to Becky who I said I'd update for. I will update tomorrow, but I've just had uni work overload today unfortunately Heres a preview to keep you going, sorry its not much ... Preview: The partys in full swing and everyones having a blast ... except for one person ... Will someone take one step too far? Quote
beckyboo Posted November 8, 2007 Report Posted November 8, 2007 Heres me sitting work at my desk in work waiting for a call (Work was dead) Thinking when I get home Rach will have updated lol Aww no only kiding hun, I no how stressed you've beee sn!! As for the preview Well you no what i think Update soon xxxx Quote
dolly-999 Posted November 8, 2007 Report Posted November 8, 2007 vale4eva said: Preview: The partys in full swing and everyones having a blast ... except for one person ... Will someone take one step too far? , please don't let either Jack or Martha try to make the other one jealous. Quote
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