gawguss_tiff Posted February 15, 2007 Report Share Posted February 15, 2007 YAY you updated -dances- lol ... that was a GREAT chpater but you soooooo cant leave it there ... i want her to tell Jack and then i want her to love Jack lol aww it was so great that Martha FINALLY saw how hard things have been for Jack and how he isnt dealing with it all that well... poor thing lol well excellent chapter Amber but i now need ANOTHER update FAST !!!!!!! lol xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adia Posted February 15, 2007 Report Share Posted February 15, 2007 That was great! I hope that last line is a sign of what is to come! You described everything so well and your writing was just fantastic! I especially loved the cake bit! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted February 17, 2007 Report Share Posted February 17, 2007 :wub: that was sooooo good. The flashback was amazing, Martha wants Jack bad Update soon, great chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linzie_mac01 Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Yes Yes Yes! Finally Martha's seen how much Jack turns her on The descriptions were incredible, i was actually blushing for her when I realised Jack had been watching her fantasising lol Hopefully now she will act on those feelings and completely ravish him when he's least expecting it (well i can dream if Martha can!) lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted February 20, 2007 Report Share Posted February 20, 2007 Ok so you leave it there It gonna be Macca or someone I hopes Arghhhhhhhhh Update ASAP xxxxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-ParaisGal- Posted February 20, 2007 Report Share Posted February 20, 2007 I think it's Brett. lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted February 20, 2007 Report Share Posted February 20, 2007 Wow, great chapter Amber As alwayz. Is it Brett at the door? 'cause his the only guy i can remember that Martha disliked before she met Jack, Brett and Jesse. Is it one of them?? Hehe, anyways, i hope Martha tells Jack soon about the memory. More please oh, and loving the sound of the new fic Cant wait Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted February 20, 2007 Report Share Posted February 20, 2007 Did you have to leave it there? I want to know who's at the door! Martha so wants Jack; it's not even funny The new fic sounds interesting...can't wait til its up and running. But then that'll mean the end of Cry To Me, and I don't want that either Great stuff as always. Please don't keep us guessing about the 'doorman' for long! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Amy~ Posted February 20, 2007 Report Share Posted February 20, 2007 Who the hell is at the door?! Great writing as usual. & Some Joey. Your new fic sounds great. I sense a Romeo & Juliet situation. Hopefully no one dies in yours. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted February 20, 2007 Report Share Posted February 20, 2007 I'm really wondering who's at the door now. Fantastic chapter as always Amber - i love the fact that she's starting to pine over Jack. It's great. Please update as soon as you can. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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