beckyboo Posted June 4, 2007 Report Share Posted June 4, 2007 Just as Martha heads out of the door, her engagement ring falls off, onto the floor. They dont even have luck in fics Fab two chapters Poor Ollie!!!!!!!1 Update soon xxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bttb-rox! Posted June 4, 2007 Report Share Posted June 4, 2007 Thanks, Becky! I'll hopefully update tomorrow . They dont even have luck in fics I know! Poor JnM - they deserve to be happy! P.S. You should check out my Jack and Martha one shot (there's a link in my sig) - that's a happy fic . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bttb-rox! Posted June 6, 2007 Report Share Posted June 6, 2007 A VERY short chapter...but enjoy ..... Chapter 5 INT. THE SUMMER BAY CARAVAN PARK HOUSE – OLLIE’S BEDROOM. Ollie is still sitting on his bed listening to some music, before he gets up and starts packing a rucksack. He starts putting his things inside. He picks up a photo of him with Sally, Ric, Cassie, Martha, Alf and Baby Pippa. He looks at it for a moment…and then puts it inside his rucksack. He leaves a written note on his bed. He then opens up his bedroom window and climbs out. INT. THE SURF CLUB – NIGHT Rachel, Kim, Jack and Martha are sitting on the wicker sofas and are having a laugh. INT. THE BACHELOR PAD – NIGHT We see someone walking into the bachelor pad. It's unclear who they are. They light a match and drop it on the floor, causing a small fire to start. This small fire then turns into a blaze. The person runs out. INT. THE SUMMER BAY CARAVAN PARK HOUSE – NIGHT Sally is in the kitchen. She calls upstairs to Ollie. Sally: Ollie! She doesn’t hear a response from Ollie. Brad: Do you want me to see if he's alright? Sally: No, thanks. I’ll go. He's probably got his radio on. INT. THE SUMMER BAY CARAVAN PARK HOUSE (OUTSIDE OLLIES BEDROOM) - NIGHT Sally: Ollie, can I come in? I just wanted to check that you’re alright. Sally opens up Ollie’s door. She sees that he isn't there. Sally: Ollie, are you in here? Sally then sees the note on his bed. She picks it up. At the end it says "I will be back. Thank you for everything". We then see Sally's face...she looks very emotional. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted June 6, 2007 Report Share Posted June 6, 2007 Hello Martha your ring is not on your finger and omg its in the fire!!!!!!!!! Poor Ollie!!!!!!! Update soon xxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bttb-rox! Posted June 6, 2007 Report Share Posted June 6, 2007 Martha your ring is not on your finger and omg its in the fire!!!!!!!!! For some reason I burst out laughing when I read this part of your comment Becky!!! Thank you . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted June 6, 2007 Report Share Posted June 6, 2007 For some reason I burst out laughing when I read this part of your comment Becky!!! Thank you . Well it is not and its in the fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your very welcome I think you should update again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bttb-rox! Posted June 6, 2007 Report Share Posted June 6, 2007 I'll update later today hopefully . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bttb-rox! Posted June 8, 2007 Report Share Posted June 8, 2007 I didn't get the chance to update the other day - sorry! So, here's the next part . Enjoy!... Chapter 6 INT. THE SUMMER BAY CARAVAN PARK HOUSE (OUTSIDE OLLIES BEDROOM) - NIGHT Sally runs down the stairs with the note in her hand. INT. THE SUMMER BAY CARAVAN PARK HOUSE - NIGHT Sally: Brad, where are you? Brad: Hey, I’m here. What’s wrong? Sally: It’s Ollie. He's gone. Brad: Gone? Gone where? Sally: I don’t know. I went up to see if he was okay and he wasn’t there. All I found was this. Sally hands Brad the note. Brad starts reading it aloud. EXT. THE BATCHELOR PAD – NIGHT The whole bachelor pad is on fire. INT. THE SURF CLUB – NIGHT Kim: Do you want another drink, Jack? Jack: Yeah, please. It better be an orange juice, though! Kim: Martha, another drink? Martha: No, I’m fine, thanks Kim: Okay, one orange juice coming up for Jack. Kim goes to order the drinks for him and Jack Rachel: So, how’s the wedding planning going, guys? Jack: I’ll let Martha answer that one. Martha: It’s just finding the right dress and the colours to match. We’ll get there in the end, though. Jack: Yep, we will. The most important thing is that we love each other. Martha and Jack kiss. Kim comes back with Jacks drink. Kim: One orange juice. Jack: Cheers, mate! EXT. A ROAD – NIGHT. Ollie is walking along a road. He sees a bus shelter. He walks up to it, and checks the timetable. He then sits down with his rucksack in the shelter. Fade EXT. A ROAD – NIGHT. Ollie is sitting in the shelter. He then sees a car. He walks out of the shelter and stops the car. Inside is a woman and a boy. Ollie: Hi, thanks for stopping. Woman: It’s no trouble. The woman notices Ollie seems unsure about something Woman: Can I help you with something? Ollie:...Yeah, actually. Err...I need a place to stay and I just wondered whether you know anywhere I could stay? Woman: Yes, I do in fact. You could come and stay with us. We're in the process of setting up an adoption centre in Yabbie Creek. But for the moment we live in Summer Bay. We’d love to have you. Ollie: That would be awesome...but I can’t. Woman: Nope, I’m not taking no for an answer. You can come and stay with us for tonight and then we can sort something out for you tomorrow. Ollie: Well, I have actually got somewhere to stay. That’s the thing. Woman: Oh…why are you asking for somewhere to stay, then? Ollie: It’s a long story. Woman: Okay. Well are you going to stand out there in the cold or are you going to get in the warm? Ollie laughs Woman: I’m Hannah and this is my son Nicholas. Nicholas: Hi. Ollie: Hi. I’m Ollie. Hannah: Pleased to meet you, Ollie. Okay, well let's get going. Hannah starts the car and drives off. Ollie smiles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted June 8, 2007 Report Share Posted June 8, 2007 Great update(s) Poor JnM and poor Ollie, I wonder who this Hannah person is. More soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted June 8, 2007 Report Share Posted June 8, 2007 And She still doesnt realise her rings not on her finger Poor Ollie Come back update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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