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:lol: Thanks, guys!

Chapter 10

Tony: Jack, what are you doing?!

Tony runs after Jack

Beth: Tony!

Tony: Don’t worry, I’ll be okay. I love you.

Beth: I love you too.

Beth starts to cry

Matilda: Hey, don’t cry. Everything is going to be fine.

INT. THE BACHELOR PAD – NIGHT

Tony: Jack, get out of here!

Jack: Dad, I’m fine.

Something falls on Jack

Tony: Jack! Jack!

Tony rushes over

EXT. THE BACHELOR PAD - NIGHT

Martha: Where is he? I’ve got to do something.

Kim: Hey, Jack will be alright.

Rachel: And his probably got the ring.

Martha: I don’t care about the ring. All I care about is Jack!

Martha runs over to where Jack was, but before she can Kim and Lucas pull her back.

Lucas: Just stay outside. Jack will be out any second.

Martha: Come on, Jack!

INT. THE BACHELOR PAD – NIGHT.

Tony: Jack, can you hear me?

Jack: Yes! What happened?

Tony: Some debris fell down on you. Look, we’ve got to get out of here. The flames are getting worse.

Jack: Okay, okay.

Jack and Tony make there way out of the house. However, Tony is struggling behind Jack.

EXT. THE BACHELOR PAD – NIGHT.

Martha: Jack?

Jack: Yeah, I’m here.

Martha runs up to hug Jack

Martha: I thought I’d lost you!

Jack: I love you too much for that to happen

Martha: Where’s Tony?

Jack: He was right behind me a second ago. I’m sure he's okay.

Martha: I love you more than anything.

They kiss

INT. THE BACHELOR PAD – NIGHT

Tony is inside the living room. Flames are trapping him from all sides. He tries to climb out of the window, but that doesn’t work. So he tries to cut through the flames.

EXT. THE BACHELOR PAD - NIGHT

Beth: Where is Tony!

Matilda: Mum, he’ll be alright. He's a fighter.

Kim: Guys, guys, the wall’s going!

Firemen: Everyone, stand back! The wall is going to go any second.

Beth: This can’t be happening. Tony!

Jack: Beth, dad will get out.

Beth: But what if he doesn’t?

Matilda hugs Beth

INT. THE BACHELOR PAD – NIGHT

With Tony still trapped by the flames, the wall suddenly crashes down on the house.

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Thanks Roccoluver!! :D That's about as far as as I have got so far in the fic, so i'm going to have to get writing....alot! I'll update tomorrow hopefully :D.

From now on the updates will be shorter but there will be more of them :D.

Mmmm, shorter.. but more often, I can live with that.

-waits for update-

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