bttb-rox! Posted June 18, 2007 Report Share Posted June 18, 2007 Thanks for your lovely comments, everyone! Great updates, I wonder why Susan has Ollie birth certificate. mmm is all as it seems? Poor Tony, this all Jack's fault, beth should deck him one Beth decking Jack - I should add that to the fic! Is all as it seems - no . Next update ... Chapter 13 EXT – THE BATCHELOR PAD – NIGHT The wall is being pulled so that Tony has the chance to break free from the rubble. He manages to do so and almost collapses on the pavement next to the house. Beth: Tony! Tony manages to open his eyes, while the paramedics check him over. Beth: Hey, it's alright. You're okay now. Tony: There was only one thing keeping me going while I was in there. Beth: What was that? Tony: You. Beth smiles warmly Tony: I love...you. Beth: I love you too. Tony’s eyes slowly shut. He stops breathing. Beth: Tony! Tony! What’s going on? Paramedic: We’ve got to get him to hospital now. Otherwise he hasn’t got a chance. Beth: What?! Paramedic: I’m sorry, but we need to get him there as soon as possible. The paramedics lift Tony up and into a stretcher before putting him inside the ambulance. Lucas: Jack, he is going to be alright, isn’t he? Jack: Yeah, mate. A tear starts to stroll down Lucas's face. Paramedic: There’s only room for one more in the ambulance. Jack: Beth, you go. Beth: Thank you. Beth holds Tony’s hand tightly. The ambulance door closes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted June 18, 2007 Report Share Posted June 18, 2007 Tony's stop breathing you can't kill Tony. More soon (With Tony alive and well ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted June 19, 2007 Report Share Posted June 19, 2007 You cant kill him!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bttb-rox! Posted June 19, 2007 Report Share Posted June 19, 2007 Thanks for your comments, Jane and Zetti! I'll hopefully update tomorrow... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack_is_exposed Posted June 20, 2007 Report Share Posted June 20, 2007 How could you do that, Tony was all like fine and then you like totally stopped him breathing like totally ok enough of that. Great update, Poor Tony and Beth. Im hating Jack for doing this to Tony. I've just had a brain wave (I know amazing) but Martha is mum! thats why someone burnt down their home! Im a real life detective lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bttb-rox! Posted June 20, 2007 Report Share Posted June 20, 2007 I've just had a brain wave (I know amazing) but Martha is mum! thats why someone burnt down their home! Im a real life detective lol You guys seem to like the thought of Martha being Ollie's mum, don't you? It wont be toooo long before all is revealed...not yet though. I've got to keep the suspense . Next update: CHAPTER 14 INT - NDH - NIGHT Rachel, Beth and the paramedics rush into the hospital Rachel: Okay, we need to get him into trauma bay one. He stopped breathing at the scene, so we need to get him on some oxygen. The machines start beeping Rachel: Come on, Tony, you can do it. Stay with us. His stats are dropping. Can someone page Julie, please? Dr Green: Yep, I'm on it. Beth walks into the hospital room Beth: Is he going to be alright? Rachel: We don't know at this stage. Beth: He has to be. Rachel: Beth, you have to wait outside, okay? Beth slowly walks outside Rachel: Julie, thank goodness you're here. INT - HANNAHS HOUSE - NIGHT Paul is in the living room. Hannah can't sleep and so she comes downstairs. Hannah: Can't sleep either, hey? Paul: Nah, I just came down to catch the footie highlights! Hannah: I knew it! Paul: You can come and watch it with me if you like. Hannah: Hmm...it's either that or read Nicky another bed time story. You know, the one I read to him everynight. Paul: Oh, that one. Hannah: I think I'll stay with you for now. Paul: I'd like that. They kiss INT - NDH - NIGHT Jack: We just got here. How is he? Is he going to be alright? Rachel: We've just given him some more oxygen and he seems to be responding well. But it's still early and we don't know the full extent of his injuries. His airways were severely blocked at the accident because of the force of the wall collapsing on him, which is why he stopped breathing. Beth: Can we go in and see him? Rachel: For five minutes and just two at time, please. Beth: Thanks. Jack: You go in first, Beth. Beth smiles. She goes into the room. Tony is lying still but manages to open his eyes slowly. Beth: I'm here. She holds his hand tightly Beth: You gave us a bit of fright. Tony:...Sophie Beth: What? Tony: Where is she? Where's Sophie? Beth: I don't know who you're talking about, Tony. Who's Sophie? Rachel: Sorry, I just need to check Tony's stats. If you could just wait outside for a minute, Beth. Beth: ...Yeah, yeah, okay. I'll be back as soon as I can, Tony. Tony: Look forward to it. Beth smiles and kisses Tony on the head. She walks outside, wondering who Sophie is. Teasers: Who is Sophie? Ollie's mother will be revealed - who will it be?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted June 21, 2007 Report Share Posted June 21, 2007 Tell us already will you! I really love this fic and how it is not just centered around Jack and Martha. Though it doesnt hurt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted June 21, 2007 Report Share Posted June 21, 2007 yay an update, yay Tony okay. more mysterious people to read about, update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bttb-rox! Posted June 21, 2007 Report Share Posted June 21, 2007 Thanks for your comments! I'll update tomorrow ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bttb-rox! Posted June 22, 2007 Report Share Posted June 22, 2007 Ollie's mother will be revealed in the next chapter! This is a VERY short part - one scene ... Chapter 15 INT – HANNAH'S HOUSE – NIGHT Ollie is awake in bed and decides to get up. He heads downstairs into the kitchen. Hannah and Paul are still kissing in the living room. Ollie: …Oh, sorry, I’ll go… Hannah and Paul both laugh Hannah: No, no, don’t worry. I was just going to make a cup of tea, do you want one? Ollie: Love one, thanks. Hannah goes into the kitchen, while Ollie slumps into a chair. Paul: Can’t sleep, hey? Ollie: Not really. I just found out that my mother is alive. Paul looks at Ollie inquisitively. Ollie: Sorry, you probably don’t know what I’m talking about. Paul: Han told me earlier, actually. Must be pretty full on for you right now... Ollie: Yeah, it is. I just wish I’d known before now. I could have got to know her. Paul: Well, what's stopping you? Ollie:...Fear, I guess. Fear of the unknown. What would I do if she just decided to run off again and leave me on my own? Paul: Is that what she did before, then? Ollie: I was given up for adoption when I was little. I thought my mother was dead for so many years, so I just resigned myself to the fact that I would never see her again. Paul: Well, we're all here for you, Ollie...night and day. Ollie: Thank you Ollie smiles and wraps himself up in a blanket, before sipping his cup of tea, while sleepily watching the darkness turn to light outside. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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