Beautiful Disaster (by sevenpuddings) - comments

[tasha7905]

Great update Jess, I love the girls bond, it seems really real. Cant wait to see what will happen with Ric/Anna hope there is more soon.

[kase]

Aww how very very lovely! That was great Jess, you can really feel the connection between the two, I loved every moment of it. It really feels like they are in a world of their own when they're having moments like that. And I'm glad Anna is really starting to fit into the group.

[Jackieleanne]

Awww Jess I agree with everything Kase said that was such a great chapter and the Ric/Anna stuff was just so touching I loved it, the connection was right there and I could see it playing out in my head. Loved the monopoly, and I'm glad that they are all getting on can't wait to read more.

[matty and luke forever]

Awww it's gorgeous!!! Can't wait for more!

[Skykat]

Aw! That was gorgeous Jess, really lovely. Love how they didn't give in straight away even though it's blatantly obvious...I can feel the chemistry sizzling! Great writing.

[tasha7905]

Skykat is right the way you have written it does make us readers feel the chemistry sizzling! The connection between Ric and Anna is fantastic, and im really glad neither of them were sure about it. Cant wait to read more.

[ash_mc]

Cuteness much? Loved it! LOVED it!

update soon

[sevenpuddings]

Aww, thanks for the amazing response everyone. I'm glad you can feel the chemistry between them... I kinda wanted that, more than anything, because it means you can actually see them being together... There will be more soon Only three more chapters though

[kase]

Awww!! Mattie is so wise and sweet. I love her friendship with Anna, I really do. And yes, she's truly fit in with them. I love Anna! I love her quirkiness, and her skepticism, and her whole little rant about not falling for a boy. She's great, I can really imagine her as a proper character. Can't wait to see where this goes...how many until the end ?

[Skykat]

Anna is so human...the way you write her, she's a genuine character with flaws and weaknesses. Really sweet chapter, bless her insecurities...well done Jess.