Beautiful Disaster (by sevenpuddings) - comments

[Jackieleanne]

Brilliant work Jess I love it can't wait to read more.

[ash_mc]

Great story Jess! I like Anna! She's just a sarcastic as me! Haha!

Please continue! Update soon!

[Skykat]

I seriously like Anna. What an attitude! Great work Jess, more soon *begs*.

[matty and luke forever]

Great!!!

[sevenpuddings]

Thanks for the amazing response everyone! I'm really glad people seem to like Anna, even if she does come across as cynical and sarcastic... honestly, whats not to love? More soonish... a whole weekend of writing lies ahead of me!

[matticus01]

this is a great story and i cant wait to read more about it....Anna seems like a really interesting character and i cant wait to read more.

[kase]

Oooh great job Jess I loved it, as usual! I love being in Anna's mind, and I love her babbling and how she was analysing everything. Her insecurities are coming out, and I'm so intrigued by this character.

And as for Ric! They have an intense relationship already! Even from not saying much, I can already feel they'll make a great couple. She really seems like Ric's type.

Can't wait to read more!!

[matticus01]

Oooh great job Jess I loved it, as usual! I love being in Anna's mind, and I love her babbling and how she was analysing everything. Her insecurities are coming out, and I'm so intrigued by this character.

And as for Ric! They have an intense relationship already! Even from not saying much, I can already feel they'll make a great couple. She really seems like Ric's type.

Can't wait to read more!!

UPDATE SOON PLEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSE

[Jackieleanne]

Brilliant job yet again Jess I loved it, great detail yet again I can't wait to see what happens next.

[Skykat]

He was tall, lean, his stomach rippled with muscles. His arms were tanned, strong, from days spent paddling in the water in search for the best break. His chiselled jaw line was only the beginning of the perfect, immaculate face of a god.

What a description! I almost fancied him myself!

I didn’t know him from a bar of soap.

I loved that line!

Great update Jess, didn't even realise you'd posted another chapter. It's great to see Anna's insecurities, it makes her a more real person. Can't wait for more.xx