Jacksthehottest Posted July 17, 2006 Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 awww that was soo sweet good chapter can't wait for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Martha_Jack Posted July 17, 2006 Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 That was good. Update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxtessaxx Posted July 29, 2006 Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 Heres chapter 19 Chapter 19 Martha dreamt about Jack that night, how perfect her day had been. Except for the bit when Jeremy came into the room. Everything was going to be okay from now on. Her life was back on track. No more Jeremy in the way, he was in jail now. Summer bay was safe. She watched the clock, it was 8:16. How was she supposed to fill in time from now until 10? That was ages, she couldn't possibly wait that long. She waited and waited and waited. And then heard a knock on the door. But it was only 9. “You're early” Martha said “Not that I'm complaining.” “I am? I didn't realise we had any arrangement to see each other.” The man said Martha twisted her head around, but she couldn't quite twist it far enough to see who it was. The voice was familiar, but she just couldn't pick it. “You're not Jack” Martha said. She was getting really worried. “You're not Ric either. Who are you?” The guy walked into the room. “Jeremy!!” Martha screamed. “Get out of here!” “Whoa, keep your voice down” He said as he patted her arm. “Get off me, and get lost!” It was 9:15, why couldn't jack have been early? “I thought you were in jail.” Martha said. “The security isn't very good these days darling” Jeremy said, with a cheesy smile on his face. “Don't you dare call me that. And do as i told you, get out!!!” Hurry up Jack! Martha thought. It was 25 past 9, why couldn't he just come and save her from this psycho now. She could feel her eyes watering, she was meant to be in Jack's company. Not this freak she met ages ago. And never liked anyway. “I'm not going anywhere, not until I get to talk to you properly anyway.” “You have 30 seconds, it starts...now.” “Martha, come on. I just want to talk to you.” “20 seconds left” she knew this wasn't going to work, but it was worth a try. It's not like he was going to do anything he told her to “Martha” Oooh, he looked kind of angry now. “10 seconds to go” He grabbed her arm and squeezed it hard. “Get off me”, Martha screamed “Let go” Then he did. “Wow, looks like you just wasted your 30 seconds telling me you wanted to talk to me and squeezing my arm. So original” Martha said. Just then a nurse walked in. Jeremy saw her and ran. “Get him” Martha screamed. The nurse ran out and got security to go after Jeremy. The nurse came back in. “The security guys will take care of him” she said to Martha She nodded. “Are you okay?” She asked “Yeah, I'm fine” She answered. She saw the nurse looking at her arm, and moved it under the blanket. “i thought we'd just do a final check up before you go home, just to make sure everything is okay” The nurse explained Martha nodded The nurse checked her over. “Everything seems to be fine Martha, just one thing” “Yeah” “Your heart rate is very high.” “Are you sure everything is fine?” she asked “Yeah, i just can't wait to go home. Thats all” Martha lied. “Okay, well I'll leave you to it, when are you being picked up?” “At 10, so I've got 10 minutes” Martha said “Alright. Enjoy, but don't do anything too strenuous and look after yourself” She said as she walked out of the room. “Yeah. Thanks” Martha said 10 minutes later, there was a knock on the door. Martha was very wary. She crossed her legs and twisted around, so she could see who it was this time. “Hey beautiful” It was Jack, she was soooo relieved. And he had a huge bunch of flowers with him! How sweet... “Jack!!!” Martha squealed “I'm so glad its you!” she said “Why, was somebody else going to come and pick you up?” “Oh, no. I don't think so. It just feels like ages” Martha said “Yeah, it does” Jack said as he sat down on the bed next to her. “So, are the flowers for me?” Martha asked expectantly “Naaah, I was going to give them to you, but then I saw this nurse. She was really gorgeous. I'll give them to her on the way out.” Jack joked “Aww. You mean the one out there?” Martha asked, pointing to a lady in white. “yeah, thats the one” “Ohh. Jack, I don't know if thats a good idea.” “I saw this guy going up to her before, with a box of chocolates. And she kind of rejected him. Not many girls would reject chocolates.” “You can always give them to me?” Martha said with puppy dog eyes. “Ha-ha you're so funny” He said as he tickled her stomach. “Hahaha, stop it Jack!!” “It tickles!!” “Good - I'm pretty sure thats whats supposed to happen.” Jack said She smiled at him. “So have you decided who you are going to give the flowers to?” she asked “yes, a beautiful girl in white.” he said He stood up. Then lifted Martha up. “I hope you like them” He said “they're beautiful” “Come on, lets go home” Jack said as he carried her out of the room. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Martha_Jack Posted July 29, 2006 Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 That was good Martha are you going to tell Jack about Jermy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M&J 4eva Posted July 29, 2006 Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 Awwwwwwww that was funny and cute with Martha and Jack Great chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katie343 Posted July 29, 2006 Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 jemy I hate you rot in jail! (this time) Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack4martha_forever Posted July 29, 2006 Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 OMG i cant believe Jeremy escaped from jail. Stupid Summer Bay police But im glad Martha is alright and safe in Jacks arms Their so cute. I luv them Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-michelle- Posted July 29, 2006 Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 this is great please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted July 29, 2006 Report Share Posted July 29, 2006 I think Jeremy's quite cool... I'm guessing I'm the only one. Lol. Great! Loved it! UPdate soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Annie- Posted July 30, 2006 Report Share Posted July 30, 2006 I think Jeremy's quite cool... I'm guessing I'm the only one. Lol. Yes, Nicole you are the only one. Great work!! More soon please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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