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Well she's a doctor they all become very annoying in the end as do the cop characters

She's been nutty ever since Robbo shown up haha

Are you trying to melt my heart made of stone? So much love in the air Nice ending and I look out for any of your other stories if you write more

Were Ty and Ryder together in this it just dawned on me that they might be Coco and Mason are going to get married well thats a tad quick but they were the atrongest out of the two couples Raffy could have named her baby predator staying true to the hunters theme haha Are you writing another story?

The Green Mile

A sweet chapter and I mean that in both the senses Being good and heartfelt. Being in water though when being disabled your legs can act differently, Or you just float on your face like me I don't know why that happens I'm not normal but hey Mason is so he could have gone for a swim Or is he in plaster casts too? In that case he would have had paper mache legs haha Not that it bugged me I just thought I would make my feedback longer than one line for you

I'm glad that Raffy knew she was dating Hunter while the rest of them didn't have a clue haha that comment from Justin was quite funny. But to fair Raffy didn't know half the time And Olivia's best wishes for Raffy seemed abit bitchy haha Merry Christmas Red have fun

While Dean I feel is just a carbon cut out of Heath. I know they have given him a Mum who has mental issues But she just feels like a Cheryl Braxton to me

Ebony will probably forget who her target is and shoot the wrong person haha Man she was a pants villain

Well Tori didn't advise Raffy that maybe it be better to hear that news by herself first haha. And I loved Justin getting confused over which brother and daughter Ben was talking about its cool you can add these amusing moments into serious scenes

Oh heck I take it back you ended up not being kind to Hunter at all in the end. And I have to admit I rolled my eyes and laughed at Mason's spine damage. because if this was the show he be ok within a week

You have to ask the big God's of the broad haha

Thats good lets hope that happens haha I don't know who this Frank is though

Hmmmm Mason loves Coco is he sure? Because if it was me I would want to show the girl off. I see trouble aproaching You going to have Mason react badly to finding out Hunter's with Raffy?

I will give you a glowing serious report next time instead of making you laugh Or maybe wait till your next story

I think that of lot of the characters Irene Leah Robbo and Dean Willow

Yep but I can't say I feel that sorry for Brax I never have haha Next chapter around Christmas time You know that's panto season too so all I will say is OH NO IT WON'T BE But I guess I'm wrong and you are right You know when you get the time to write lol

Is the idea to go double dating? That will be fun for them all I'm sure Hunter won't like taking Raffy out in public but I'm still convinced that Mason and Coco will be the ones with the trouble on the way Ah Ty is still around thats cool He has only been the new character I have really liked this year

It finishes this Friday to make way for channel 5's Christmas shows They have been playing Christmas movies already haha

It is bound to go badly for one of the pairs I say Mason and Coco will be the couple to get thrown the spanner They seem the strongest more stable for the time being

Is that any good?

Mason meh But Tori tops it for me for being the most annoying. Going to the North Pole I would class as a treat given its nearly Christmas time haha

Awww living the high nightlife of Australia throwing up amongst the sand dunes I wouldn't know never been but that's what I imainge haha But you have to feel sorry for Raffy she's going to wake up with a very fishy hangover Lets hope she's a fine of the smell of fish

Is this the start of Raffy rebelling against the world? I hope so good person turn bad type of thing

Brody caused a car crash Mason became paralyzed Beth pretended to be a nurse at the hospital but she was really a patient in need of a heart transplant she helped Mason find his feet again haha They fell in love and Beth then died after Mason failed to convince a guy to allow his wife's heart that was a match for Beth to be used the story seemed to be very quick and abit pants