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Thanks for the mention Becky; very sweet Poor Ava I hope she's found soon. The teedy bear touch was very upsetting; but a great idea. More soon please

*Shakes head* Not good Becky, not good! The little 'episode' with Ava at the station was funny! I want to ask for an update soon, but I'm not sure if I dare...

Really sorry to hear about your loss. And you've been sick too; know the feeling Thanks for the update. Really felt for Jack in that one. Martha can be so stubborn and unresponsive sometimes! Hmm, the face at the hospital- maybe something to do with Martha's accident?? Post when you can

Aww, Ava is so cute! Damn Cam for beating Martha! I hate him even more now! They're gonna try for another baby that's just cuteness. Glad you've decided to make it longer; can't wait for the next update

Aww; the first two chapters were brilliant! I had a tear in my eye when I read the first chapter. It was excellently written though; poor Martha and Mali But, I'm glad they've left Greg Idiot! Second chapter; let the romance begin Can't wait to read more!

Awww, that was brilliant. Really, really good The last line did it for me; that was just the perfect ending. I could so imagine Jack saying something like that. He's just the best I hope Martha realises the error of her ways on the show like she did in your oneshot. Great stuff Jack4Martha!

I absolutely loved that! I would like you to continue with it Cam! I hate him so much. And, I couldn't believe he had the nerve to punch Martha

Awww, that was just I'm quite shocked that Martha gave in actually. I guess she just couldn't resist the Jack Holden charm any longer. I mean, who in their right mind could? Kind of Feeling sorry for Eamon. I know he and Richard were being selfish before...but I hope he's not too mean to her when he finds out! Can't wait for the next update!

Aww, that was so sad Joy is getting a bit too 'attached' to our Jack Not liking that one smidgen! Absolutely love Jason for telling it like it is! *Go Jason, go Jason* Loving this Amber; but not the fact that someone's in an accident More soon please!

Oh dear. Like Jack, I thought he'd made progress with Martha. Well, he did make some. Baby steps Jack, baby steps Great chapter. Jack with blood running from the side of his face Action Man! lol The next chapter sounds great too. Don't like the sound of tears and heartache though I bet it'll be Martha on the recieving end. In a way, a hope it is. Maybe then she'll come to her senses! Can't wait for more!

Aww, Martha's pregnant and she's moving back in with Jack; that's great news Great update, more soon please.

Please, please, please let it be the first and not the latter. Martha's finally accepted her love for Jack, don't let her stupidity get in the way! I kinda like Joy. Jason was cute too. But, were they a little too understanding of the situation?? A happy Jack; that's always a bonus Great update, more soon please.

Oooh, interesting start! I don't like this Rebecca I love the way Luc was so abrupt and rude; she must be trouble! Can't wait to read on

I agree Great update Bay Girl. I can't wait for them to go on their date's. Maybe then Martha will realise how special Jack is, even though it's so damn obvious But, I am glad they got a few things sorted in the last chapter. I hate it when Jack's upset Please update soon.

I have now read chapter 44 three times! The first two times i couldn't comment because the internet connection kept dying on me. So, it's third time lucky *fingers crossed*. The chapter was brilliant; all three times Bless Martha I really want Jack to comfort her; please make it happen Nicole- as a birthday gift