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Finally! Martha put her ego aside and now they're togther again That chapter was so cute Amber, really good! Don't like the sound of the preview though... Can't wait for more, please update as soon as you can!

Aww, that was so cute! Jack's little speech to Cam about what love is, was so lovely And, a more assertive Martha; that was great to read! If only she would open her eyes on the show now, and realise what a jerk and sleaze Cam really is! Great one shot!

I actually think Martha's being a tad bit unreasonable Jack's only trying to do the right thing. He thinks Rebecca is having his baby and just wants to be there for her. It's not fair to make him choose- poor Jack Rebecca, on the other hand Well, she's just bad news!

Puja darling shes a Holden Whoops, my mistake

Aww, she's a fighter that McKenzie! But, she was shot twice?! Bet that jerk Cam had something to do with it Jack Holden certainly is a hero This fic is really, really good! You write it so well and your style is very unique Hope you update soon.

This is really, really good! Poor Martha I hope she's alright. And Jack. Risking his life to go and save her. What a guy Can't wait for more Pamy!

Poor Jack! What an uncomfortable situation! Loved that chapter. I could just imagine the little confrontation between Martha and Rebecca

Glad Jack got there on time! Aww, bubs' coming

That was so sad Nicole. I felt both their pain; and it hurt Great writing though. I really hope they can work things through. Jack needs her to listen to what he went through (queue Dr. Armstrong) I hope in the next chapter, there's some sort of breakthrough. More soon please!

Tony's such a legend What a classic remark! Finally got the chance to catch up with this fic! I had actually read the updates earlier on today, but didn't get chance to comment because my sister's damn laptop died on me Damn technology! I'm so glad Ava is ok *wipes brow in relief*. Corey is just a nasty piece of work; hope he rots in jail like he has been doing in the show Aww, not many chapters to go now...Jacky had better get a move on, if he knows whats good for him, he'll get there in time for the birth. I want it to be a boy. A baby boy Holden would just be the sweetest It would definately complete the family! Looking forward to the next update already!

Great double update Damn Henry for casuing a rift between them Just when things were heading in the right direction too. I think Pete's ace, but I wish he could have been the bearer of some good news...like, Henry being dead for instance (just a subtle hint you might want to keep in mind for future references!) Ok, the last chapter made me want to cry. Not only for Jack, but for Martha too. From her point of view, it is so easy to blame Jack for being selfish and not telling her about Henry. But, she should know that he would never hurt her. Not intentionally anyway. And Jack, he's just a sweetheart, isn't he?? I wanted to give him the mother of all hugs as he watched Martha speed off into the distance. I had a tear in the corner of my eye when he refused to let go of the vehicle I just hope he gets the chance to explain to Martha in the next chapter and tell her all that he'd been through *hopes* I know that'll make me wanna cry too, but at least Martha will be able to comfort him. Bless his little cotton socks. Brilliant writing as always Nicole, more soon please.

Aww, that was very well written; so sweet! That woman from the hospital sounds plain evil! Mrs Holden had better watch her step *gulps* Martha may not be looking forward to the conversation, but we all are Can't wait for the next update Amber!