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Its finishing??? The last two chapters were great; brilliantly written

Great moments between Jack and Martha; so sweet! I really hope Jesse doesn't do anything to ruin Jack's birthday party...if he does, I won't be happy Can't wait for the next update!

Great update, once again! I fear for Martha... Please don't hurt her. More soon please!

The end?! Awwww, great fic though! I'm glad it ended on a happy note

That chapter was fantastic! In fact, all the chapters that I've caught up with have been brilliant! I'm so happy Martha and Jack are now together They sooooo deserve some happiness. Let's just hope they can get to spend some, 'alone' time together, without always being interupted! I hope that's the end of evil Jesse. They ought to lock him up and throw away the key (just a suggestion ) Please update soon!

Great chapter Let's think about this rationally. You can understand Martha wanting to be alone for a while. It doesn't exactly look (or probably feel right) coming out of a pretty developed relationship, and then heading straight into another. Even if that new relationship is with Jack Hoden... Kinda felt sorry for Carl too. I hope he doesn't come back, seeking revenge Please update soon!

Hey, welcome back! Thanks for the update; I really missed reading this fic! I hope your internet connection holds up now...so... update soon please

Oh dear...Poor Martha I do and I don't want Jack to find out; he'll be heartbroken but, at least he will be thankful that she's now awake, even if she doesn't remember him! Felt sorry for Alf too. Couldn't have been easy for him to tell her and it wouldn't have helped that she was making funny remarks! (I personally thought they were quite funny ) Great chapter, please update soon!

Lol! That comment made me chuckle! *Sighs* Poor Jack. I was constantly going, 'awwww' throughout the whole of that chapter on his behalf. Please could you give him something to be happy about in the next chapter??! Fantastic chapter; more soon please.

Loved that last chapter: it was fab! I love the drunk Rachel; she was hilarious. And so was Eamon!! Please update soon

WOW!! Fantastic chapter! That was just....so...brilliant!! I don't know what I'm more shocked at; the fact Martha doesn't remember Jack or the fact that I agree with Nicole.. !! lol Please update soon; can't wait to read on!!

Welcome Back! The last two chapters were great! I'm liking the friendship between Jack and Martha at the moment, I hope it stays like that. ( Yes, you read right! I want them to maintain their friendship; I personally think its kinda sweet ) Can't wait for the next chapter!

beautiful!

Awww, that was really sad! I loved the last part; the lily was a beautiful touch! Great work!

Awww, that was really sad I'm glad the two of them had that conversation; it was much needed but...no, I'm not going to be greedy; I'll settle for friendship...for the moment Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!

Joey is a baby Kangaroo- I thought that analogy was really cute! (I hope that's what you meant bay girl if not, I have embarrassed myself ) lol Great opening; I'm really looing forward to seeing how this develops! Hmmm, hope she's not in hospital or something. Can't wait for more!

*sighs* That was fantastic The fic ended very appropriately and I'm glad it was a very, very happy ending! I'm going to miss reading this fic (Just remebered- you said you've got another J+M one waiting in the wings...can't wait ) Thanks for the regular updates of chapters; you must have been tied to your computer! lol Great work!!!

Perfect!!

Thanks for the chapter Noel! (sorry, couldn't resist! ) An excellent chapter! Full of emotion and drama; a grrreat combination! I know in my earlier posts I complained about how much I hated Eamon but in that last chapter, I was rooting for him all the way!! He really told Jack what a meanie he was being...he hit him where it really hurt. I hope Jack will start being a little more plesant to Martha now...(oh dear, just relaised I've gone to the dark side... why the hell am I sticking up for Eamon??? ) Anyway... , update soon please!!

Great, great, great!! I wanna know what Eamon has to say...he best not be nasty to poor Jacky! Can't wait for the next update!

Only two more chapters left to go... Great chapter. The little speeches given by the brothers were hilarious! I can't wait for the wedding; hope it all goes well

Awwww, such a sweet chapter! I'm glad they all get along so well and they approve of Jack, but, who wouldn't?! lol