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Fantastic!!!!

Fantastic chapter! I agree with Annie, possibly the best chapter you have ever written. The description, the emotion, everything was just perfect and so empathetic. I loved the Tony/Martha interection. It wasn't forced and it was so natural. More soon please

Please ask her Jack! lol More soon please!

This is great! Even though its taken her a wile, Martha is slowly realising that she should indeed be with Jacky! Can't wait for more!

Martha loves him too! Then it's simple; she should dump Carl, get married to Jack and raise their family together in blissful harmony! (I wish!!) Why did Jack have to be so damn considerate?! How can he watch another man raise his child?? Damn you Jack Holden and your sensitive mannerisms! Ok, I think I'll calm down now Great update. More soon please!

Wow; that was fantastic! A gripping and utterly brilliant chapter! Jack! *sobs* You cannot understand how upset I am right now (and yes people, I know it's only a fic but... I can't help it!) Please update soon and put us out of our misery...I want to know how Martha is coping.

Jack was so close to convincing her...damn it! Great update though; your writing is excellent. Can't wait for more!

Loved it! Glad no one got hurt; except for Elvis! Please update soon

Not sure if Lara is good or corrupt??? Great suspense though! Bless Boyd; that must have been a real shock! I love this fic; thanks for updating and can't wait to read on.

Thanks for ending the chapter on such a cliffhanger...not! I'm loving the name Elvis for the bad guy. I love the irony too; Elvis the singer is dead and I'm sure this villan will be too if Martha is hurt! Anyway, can't wait for more!

Yay, an update! You kept us waiting long enough! Action-man Jack to the rescue!!!...Or not so Ok, me thinks Jack picked the wrong day to play the, 'invincible cop' More soon please!!

Yay! They finally kissed. Great chapter!

Great update! Please don't let it be Martha or Jack in danger!

Great update! Jack was so sweet and understanding; as always . I guess he didn't want to tell her his own feelings as it would confuse matters further. I'm just happy that the bubs' is definetly Jack's

What a scarey dream to have Great writing though! Please update soon

Me likes; I think!! Please update soon; can't wait to hear Jack's reaction!

Er-hmmm; so have we!! *Whispers*- I believe Nicole still lives in the Dark Ages; bless

I hope whatever it is Martha has to say; it's good news (for Jack that is ) Maybe a break-up on the cards? *hopes* Please update soon.

Er, yeah, I kinda missed Home and Away today...and I'm going to Meadowhall tomorrow to do a bit of shopping so I also miss the repeat...But, blame bay girl for her fabulous writing! Once I started, I just felt I had to carry on... (I hope that's a good enough excuse; I usually watch Home and Away religiously lol) Thanks Nicole! I agree! lol

Right, not to boast but I do believe I deserve a round of applause. Basically, for some unknown reason, I had not read this fic before and I wanted to rectify this mistake. So, I set aside this whole afternoon to read this fan-fic! (2pm-6.30pm) That's right people, I read all fifty-seven chapters in one go (ok, I had a twenty minute break in between) but I think that's pretty good going, don't you? Now, the main reason I was able to read this entire fic in one go because...it is so damn good! Literally, every chapter was a page turner! Excellent work bay girl, can't wait for more! WARNING: You will all now be seeing more frequent posts from me on this fic i.e. everytime there is an update lol