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This is great and very dramatic! I am literally on the edge of my seat! Please update soon.

That was great Nicole! A very fitting ending! This has been one of my favourite fanfics to read and I have enjoyed every moment of it! (Just for the record, I don't remember once thinking it was boring!!) I'm really glad that Jack and Martha made it in the end. After all that they had been through, any other ending would have been too cruel.

Just read the 2 1/4 chapters and they were brilliant! Really hope Martha is ok though! Please update soon. xx

Ah! Nicole, that was great! I was waiting for this fic. In a way, I hope Robbie does tell Martha; it would teach Jack a lesson...But I don't want Martha to get hurt. I guess I can't have it both ways! Excellent chapter!

Sorry for not updating for a while guys, I'm just working on the chapter now. Should have an update either by tonight or tomorrow morning. Thanks xx

Excellent Nicole! Can't wait for the third and final installment...I just hope it's a happy ending!

Yeah, really good chapter! I'm with Peter on this...something isn't quite right...the escape seems too easy...I hope I am wrong though. I want Jack and Peter to kick some Callum ass! Update soon please!

Great, great great! Please update soon! Loved it.

Can't wait for the next update. The last chapter was so good!

Excellent update and it was really well written as per usual! Poor Martha- having to touch that freak Mason! Can't wait for the next chapter!

This fanfic is so good. Please, please udate soon!!!

I'm sorry for leaving it as a cliffhanger. I won't be able to update today because it's my brother's birthday and we've got family coming round- a little busy. Should have an update tomorrow. Thanks for all the positive comments.

Fantastic!

Very, very good! Please update soon!

Can't wait for the next chapter- it so wasn't boring! Excellently written too!

Thanks guys for your supportive comments-it's really appreciated. This is such a sensitive subject area, I just hope I have done it justice and continue to do so. I'm working on the next few chapters as I speak. Hopefully I'll be able to put up the next two chapters by midday tomorrow (uk time).

Sorry guys, I won't be able to update for a while. I've got my final Uni exam on thursday, so won't have time to update. Hopefully I'll be able to post a couple of chapters over the upcoming weekend. Thanks so much for all you're nice compliments...I love how you all hate Mason!

What can I say? I don't have the words. Literally and emotionally- brilliant. Well done!xx

Excellentlly written. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Sorry, my description wasn't that good! Yeah, the holes are the actual designs on the cardigan. Sorry!

Towards the end of the last chapter, I got the impression she was being taken, against her will. i.e. kidnapped? That was why Jack began to run towards her?! Anyway, great work Nicole...it just gets better and better!

Please update as soon as!! Can't wait to read the next installment!

Oh My God! You can't leave it like that bay girl, excellent chapter!! Please post next chapter as soon as! Can't wait to read it!

Thankyou jackandmartha for all the time you spent writing those brilliant fics! I can appreciate the time it must have taken you but despite that, they were all so well written too! Can't wait for your next installment! Have you got any potential storylines in mind?

I'm new to this site and i've read the whole story, from start to finish, in one go! That's how good it is! Maybe some of the Home and Away writers should come on this site for some inspiration! Keep up the excellent work and please don't keep us in suspense for muck longer!!