Skykat

Just read both. Fantic stuff! I'm particulary liking the second one, just can't imagine Cassie as a punk though! More soon please.xx

Lol I noticed you reading Undercover Cop! lol Poor you, I bet that took you a while! lol It did but it was worth it though!

Wow. it's taken me a hell of a long time to catch up, I was still halfway through undercover cop one! You've done a fantastic job in keeping this away from typical Jack Martha fanfics, it's great, really well done and more soon please.xx

My God! I've just caught up with this...this story has moved on. Pretty incredible stuff, you're doing really well with this. I'm on tenterhooks to know if it's Eve or not or if not who else it is. You had me hooked into thinking it was a romance and now it's a psycotic murder mystery. By the way is it really bad that I'm relieved Kim's out of the picture? *the smiley's are still missing but I'm pulling tongues* Seriously great story please post again soon.

Nice one. more soon please!

This is great, I'm really enjoing it. More soon please.

Who's at the door? This is good, an interesting concept but I like it. more soon please.

Wow psycho alert! I've just caught up with this story, you've done a fantastic job...really enjoyed it. More soon please!

That was great, what a start to the sequel. really well done!

Phew! Just caught up, that was great Jess - really well done! The best writers are always perfectionists but you shouldn't worry because you did really well there, can't wait for the next chapter. Gutted it's to be the last - I've really enjoyed this. kat.xx

Great chapter. I'm gutted you won't be updating for a while, hope your move goes well though.

Oh my god that is fantastic. I'll be honest I thought too much was known about sally's past for you to pull it off but you really managed it. well done! I'm going to be on eggshells for the next few weeks waiting for the next installment. Just one little thing, not a criticism but I thought you might appreciate knowing. Tom and Pippa's surname was Fletcher she didn't become Mrs Ross until years later after Tom had died in a car crash and she married Michael Ross. Does nothing to detract from a fantastic start though.

Intriguing and very different from the way I expected you to go. I'm glad you've taken this in a different direction than typical Jack/Martha fics. Well done.

Thats a good start. I'm sensing an attempt to get her back? Well done you should keep writing.

This just keeps getting better. PLEASE don't let it end!

Fantastic chapter. This is so believable and the descriptions are so vivid I can just picture it. Poor Angie and Josie for that matter. I love your style of writing, please post again soon. Kat.xx

That's a good start, wonder who her enemy is.

Quality. Not much else to say.

Wow. Enough said.

Great work Angelrose!

Fabulous. No story's real without **** ups and your description of this one seems very much like something that would happen. An excellent, well written chapter, this story's taking me in...more soon please.

Wow, fantastic twist at the end. If you don't keep going with this I love Music I'll bombard you to death by PM, it's a fantastic story and I'm far too involved in it for you to stop writing now!

Great chapter, really liking this story. I can see trouble ahead.... *Now has stupid song in head and curses self for thinking it*

I'm not a big Matilda and Lucas fan so I never took time to read this before but I was bored today and thought I'd check it out and I'm glad I did. It reminded me a bit of Dawson's Creek with the four teenagers dealing with life, don't know why. The way you get behind what the characters are thinking and feeling is incredible, it's something I've never been able to do and it's a wonderful talent that you have. You've almost made me a Matilda and Lucas fan and got me feeling sorry for Cassie, a character I usually despise! Seriously though well done, this is great and I look forward to reading more. I have this feeling that things are going to get very interesting in the next few chapters and I can't wait!

Have you watched it before now? I honestly didn't think there was much more they could do after Season One but they did. Enjoy. I never really watched this show But I ended up buying the 1st half of Season 4 on DVD because Aisha Tyer was in them someone told me to watch the first series half way through so I did and have been hooked on it ever since. I've got the first four seasons on dvd, I love it. What did you think of the episodes you watched?