And she's back and there's 2 whole updates. Yay!
Feel so sad for Annie, it's just horrible what she's going through, and I can see why she would be in denial about it all, to begin with. If you don't think about it then you can pretend it's not happening to you. Hope things get better for her and she uses the support from Geoff, Belle etc. Also it was a nice touch giving full details on her cancer in the 1st update. Great research there.
Melody/Belle relationship continues to be written perfectly, as is the Mrs Jones/Melody one. It comes across so naturally. So well done there.
And finally Adelle makes an appearance, good to see them starting to sort things out. Belle's phone rambling was funny. Can't wait for them meeting at the Den, it better take place in the next chapter, don't dissappoint me on that note.
Great stuff, more soon please.