KittCatt Posted March 13, 2016 Report Share Posted March 13, 2016 Great Chapter! Glad Tamara's vision problems are finally diagnosed. Wish there was a cure though. Glad she made the decision to tell Josh as soon as possible. Liked that Josh has been boxing. Great release of stress. Ohh i love a good cliffhanger hope the others get home soon, though if Tamara is there i wonder where Kyle is. I understand Josh just wanting to give up and give in; its a lot easier but another persons life is in danger too. And he hasn't come so far to give up now. I'm guessing the police are oblivious to all this. I look forward to more 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted March 13, 2016 Report Share Posted March 13, 2016 Sorry I hadn't been on the BTTB forum lately for a while so I had been catching up with this fanfiction, lol. Great chapters! Loved the cliffhanger at the end of the chapter Looking forwards to the next chapter 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittCatt Posted March 16, 2016 Report Share Posted March 16, 2016 Great Chapter! Love a good cliffhanger and this chapter certainly delivered! Poor Josh... and Kyle... and Tamara... and Andy... and ... pretty sure who the girl is... How Tank managed to do all that without the police batting an eye is worrying. Now that Andy can talk he should try to scream to alert the cops. Or do something cause Kyle looks to be in a very bad place, nevermind everyone else. All they need now is for John and Marilyn to come home Not sure if Tank would expect that. Hope someone realizes they are in trouble.. before it's too late. Excellent writing as usual. You certainly know how to write psychopathic Tank, while demonstrating the fears from Josh, Andy and the others well. Look forward to more, update soon 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted March 16, 2016 Report Share Posted March 16, 2016 Thanks KittCatt! Much appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted March 16, 2016 Report Share Posted March 16, 2016 Great chapter poor Kyle,Andy,Josh and Tamara. I hope Andy will get help now that he can talk. I wonder what Tank will do next. I Look forward to more Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted March 17, 2016 Report Share Posted March 17, 2016 Poor Josh, Kyle, Tamara, Andy and the other girl who I'm pretty sure I know who it is How Tank can get away with all that is a bad sign. Wonder what he will do next please update soon ? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KittCatt Posted March 18, 2016 Report Share Posted March 18, 2016 Wow Great chapter! Like how you have written a timeline of events. Now we understand how Tank got Evie and why the cops are useless. Oscar should surely know by now that something is up. Poor Phoebe Feel very sorry for Kyle who is slowly dying and had to see his dead ex girlfriends body. Glad Tamara physically seems to be okay. Good job pretending to be blind. Glad she has called Kat. Tamara is the only one who can save them, quickly. Though i don't know how.. maybe she should try to untie Andy quickly. I don't know. But she probably needs to do something else as soon as possible. Or Evie and Kyle will die. Poor Josh and Andy too. While it's good that Tank isn't getting that much of a reaction out of Josh, it's worrying that he has gone into some sort of catatonic state. And Andy, having to tell him what's happening to Evie. Great writing once again, hope everyone will be fine, update soon 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted March 18, 2016 Report Share Posted March 18, 2016 Great chapter Liked how you used time lines. poor Kyle. oh no Tank killed Phoebe. I hope the cops do catch Tank. I look forward to more update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Suzza101 Posted March 18, 2016 Report Share Posted March 18, 2016 Great chapter love the timeline poor Kyle, seeing Pheobes dead body and slowly dying. Poor Pheobe poor everyone I hope the cops catch Tank I look forward to more update soon please 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted March 18, 2016 Report Share Posted March 18, 2016 Had been catching up with the last two chapters Poor Phoebe! Can't believe Tank killed her! Feel sorry for Kyle when he saw his ex-girlfriend's body Update soon please xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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