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Great chapter

Gee waking up next to Tank like that would've been so frightening. :( Wonder what exactly Tank did. Loved how you captured Josh's fear. 

Hope everyone soon realizes Tank has done this.

Glad Ash and Phoebe found Josh. Things don't look great for him.. 

Also continue to love Tamara. And Kyle :P

Great writing once again, update soon 

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Great chapter!

Feeling so sorry for Josh. Everyone is doubting him but he know's what really happened. Wish Andy and everyone else would believe him. :( But am glad he is pushing through and wants to call Kat.

You captured Josh's anger and misery perfectly, as well as Andy's doubts and heartache at the hospital. Well done. Also enjoying Andy and Evie's scenes throughout the story. Keep it up.

Update soon :P

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Great chapter!

Feel so sorry for Josh. No one believed him and they didn't even really seem to try. Understandable that Josh is angry at them but he still needs them, Andy especially. Heartbreaking scene with Josh and Andy at the end. Very powerful writing xx 

Hope everyone can be a little more understanding and compassionate in the morning, especially Evie. I think he needs her more than she realizes.

Update soon :P

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