Red Ranger 1 Posted July 10, 2012 Report Posted July 10, 2012 Wow, this is very different and I'm certainly hooked.Ruby and Liam is not a pairing that crops up often so I'm interested to see where you go with it. Quote
pembie Posted July 11, 2012 Report Posted July 11, 2012 I really enjoyed this chapter great start. I feel like it will be Liam who will fall victim to the stresses of working in the music industry. more than Ruby. I wonder how long they will hide each others feelings for one another? Quote
Phoebe Posted July 11, 2012 Report Posted July 11, 2012 Wow! Jen I knew you were a fantastic writer but that is fantastic! You really have me hooked! Quote
Jen Posted July 13, 2012 Report Posted July 13, 2012 Red Ranger - Thanks for reading, Red. Yeah, it is a bit different both stylistically and pairing wise from my normal stuff, so hopefully you continue to enjoy it. The original premise was Ruby/Liam tour sex, and that was it. It's in spoilers in case you are curious, but it doesn't end up going in that direction completely. pembie - I agree about your assessment of Liam. Having been there and done it before he definitely knows what to expect more, but I think that adds to the pressure he might be feeling. Beezzz - Wow. Thank you very much, Phoebe. Aden_Belle - Thanks! Next part coming soon. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 13, 2012 Author Report Posted July 13, 2012 Wow, that was pretty intense in places.You're capturing the thoughts and feelings really well and striking a nice balance between the relaxed banter and the underlying tension.Looking forward to more! Quote
pembie Posted July 14, 2012 Report Posted July 14, 2012 Well that was very tense and I thought quite steamy in the classroom photoshoot. I can sense that Liam and Ruby's professional relationship won't be so professional soon. This could give 50 Shades of Grey a run for its money.... Great Chapter Quote
Phoebe Posted July 14, 2012 Report Posted July 14, 2012 Woah! Great chapter Jen! You write with such detail! Have you thought about becoming an author? Quote
Inactive User Posted July 15, 2012 Report Posted July 15, 2012 Whoa! Had been reading the last two chapters and it's really good Quote
Jen Posted July 16, 2012 Report Posted July 16, 2012 Red Ranger - Wow. Thank you so much. I really appreciate the feedback, particularly in relation to striking a blanace between description and dialogue. pembie - It's not unprofessional if they don't get caught, right? This could give 50 Shades of Grey a run for its money.... Ha! I don't know if that's a good thing or not. I've seen snippets of it and the writing is just grating . Certainly not what I am going for here. Beezzz - Woah, to you too! That's quite the compliment. You wouldn't believe how many times I've tried to write something original and having it completely stall. I find writing fanfic so much easier. But, who knows?! JarlieFanEver - Thank you very much for reading and commenting. Final part coming up. Quote
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