InfantryAlex Posted November 22, 2011 Report Share Posted November 22, 2011 So, I know I've been away for two whole months! But, I have this story in mind after I saw the Black Balloon with Rhys Wakefield in it! (Lucas) I had this idea, that will be explained in the plot! Though, I've totally forgot the layout to how to set it up, so I'll copy it from my other fan fiction that I -must- continue. Title: Justice Needs to be Served. Type of Story: Medium long (Undecided). Main Characters: Lucas, Angelo/Nicole, others. BTTB Rating: T Genre: Angst and Drama. Warnings: T - involved Mild language, and mild violence. Spoilers: Well I don't think so, this is generally my own idea that if I was a writer of H/A would have happened. Plot: Say Tony never told Lucas that there was no Justice for Jack his brothers death, and he found out. Lucas makes a return to Summer Bay. To make sure justice is served for Jack. But while he was there, he receives more news, that Martha had ran away with Hugo, Jack's cousin. How does Lucas take all this? Will Lucas get justice Jack deserves? Chapter One - Returning to Summer Bay. 'How will this play out' ran through Lucas' mind while he was on the bus from the city, going to Summer Bay. He never knew how it would feel being here without his father and more so his brother. Lucas was raged with anger. How could his own brother a police man's killer run free? The bus had now arrived into a town he once loved. He got off the bus with his ruck sack on his back. This wasn't easy for him, a lump arose in his throat. He had now found the Pier diner and entered it, greeted by an unfamiliar person. Roo Stewart, "Hello, Sir, new to town what may I get you?" "Uh, no, just returning. Gonna try and get justice for my brother who died, I'll have a mocha though," said Lucas. "Oh no, who was your brother maybe we know him?" said Roo. Pointing to Irene, Colleen and Marilyn. "It was Jack," said Lucas. Irene perked up, "Lucas!" she rushed around and gave him a hug. "I'm sorry Angelo never got justice for killing Jack, was such a terrible time. Then Martha running off with that Hugo Austin -" "She ran away with Hugo?" asked Lucas. "Well I thought you knew," said Irene. "Well now I do," told Lucas. He had his mocha in peace and then left to go get a caravan and the Caravan park. Short chapter, I know. But my net is so freaking slow for no reason! And it's driving me mad What do you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Wow great start to this fanfiction! Looking forwards to read more of it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pembie Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Nice idea you have here Look forward to more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lozlovesh&a Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Good start. Continue please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soph1303 Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Great idea for a fanfic, looking forward to seeing where you take this , More soon please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 OMG! Awesome. I thought it was rather daft! But it seems it was a good idea! I will post soon. I have to think of the next chapter He meet Angelo? Or he talks to Martha's mother? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elikell Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Very interesting start. Can't wait to see where you take this... Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 Great start please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 I still think it's a rather daft story. But I am getting there. Anyway, will be updating soon. Just catching up with 'The Cop and the Criminal' story and my other one This will be done once I actually think of where to take this next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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