Red Ranger 1 Posted October 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2011 Some nice banter between Rikki and Bella, especially about dolphins groping them.And woah at both Gypsy's scenes!At first I thought she really was dating Heath but then at the end when it turns out she's undercover...Majorly ironic that Charlie's the one masterminding it all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 10, 2011 Report Share Posted October 10, 2011 Fab chapter. Liked the banter between Rikki and Bella. Great work. Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted October 10, 2011 Report Share Posted October 10, 2011 MANY thanks for the AWESOME comments !!!! I LOVE writing Rikki ….. she’s soooo feisty & smart-mouthed [h2o’s Gypsy as such] …… and as much as I kinda like Charlie/Brax in real H&A, I LOOOOOVE Charlie with a gal pal WAAAY too much in my fics ....so, yeah, she's muchly detached from the River Boys !!!! Should update within the next week or so !!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 14, 2011 Report Share Posted October 14, 2011 Great chapter Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2011 Loved the Charlie/Gypsy chat:"Thankfully, I've never had that problem."And Alf and John seeing the tourist benefits of a freak snow storm was a great scene as well.Looking forward to more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 17, 2011 Liked the conversation between Ruby and Brett, it was very in character and made me smile in places.Some nice one-liners from Dexter as well, such as assuming Emma had the plan and pondering her breezing her HSC and working in an adult store.Very curious to know who that is at Joey's door... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 18, 2011 Report Share Posted October 18, 2011 Fab update Liked the conversation between Ruby and Brett Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 21, 2011 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2011 Good that Joey's got a friend and I liked the little bit of them watching Dex World.And woah at the end, am I right in suspecting that that's Shannon?Looking forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JosieTash Posted October 21, 2011 Report Share Posted October 21, 2011 Good that Joey's got a friend and I liked the little bit of them watching Dex World.And woah at the end, am I right in suspecting that that's Shannon?Looking forward to more. Yep, Red Ranger 1, your guess is correct. With the snowy weather about, who better to bring back to the Bay than one of my ALL TIME [2nd only to Gypsy] H&A faves !!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted October 24, 2011 Report Share Posted October 24, 2011 Great chapter Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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