Red Ranger 1 Posted January 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2012 Liked Ruby's reaction to Charlie and Bianca's alone time.Looking forward to seeing how this clash with the River Boys goes down. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 Awesome chapter Liked Ruby's reaction to Charlie/Bianca having time alone together. Update soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted January 3, 2012 Report Share Posted January 3, 2012 Fab chapter! Liked it so far. Pity two more chapters of this fanfic to go But I am enjoying reading it Update soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2012 Wow, excellent update.Loved the chat between Ruby and Cleo and pretty shocked about what Heath did to her, thank goodness Emma was there.Looks like it's going to be a pretty tense last two chapters... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted January 6, 2012 Report Share Posted January 6, 2012 Awesome chapter! Update soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2012 (edited) Definite tense chapter.Rikki's turn to play rescuer(although she needs to learn the concept of "reasonable force")and did not see Gypsy and Angelo coming but it's an interesting idea.And the end:Charlie and Brax shot each other?!I can see this having a not so happy end but I'm very intrigued to see where it all goes... Edited January 6, 2012 by Red Ranger 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 Great chapter. Update soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 Nice update, glad that Charlie...might be all right and she was a more accurate shot than Brax. Loved Lily's comment on Gypsy and glad the kids are okay.Wonder how Joey will react to the news... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted January 10, 2012 Report Share Posted January 10, 2012 Great chapter-liked the ending. Pity it's really over! But I did enjoying this fanfic and of course your other ones, JT Update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 10, 2012 Brilliant!Nice happy ending, a few surprises in there as well:I so wasn't expecting Joey, April and Dex to all leave permanently.I like that Ruby and Xavier sorted out their problems and both ended up happy and lots of moments to make me smile:Bianca revealing too much information to Ruby, Xavier's reaction to Gina in a bikini.There was a genuinely heartwarming feel to it all and I enjoyed reading. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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